No Lemurs At the Zoo (Thank You Walt Disney)

A short while back when Shayla was three,                     Written just for Barbara's Contest.
I took my granchild's child to the Zoo with me.

She sat in he stroller as we pushed her around,
And she knew almost every creature we found,

Lion goes "RRRR" and Tiger goes "Roar,"
Hippos go "plplplpl" which I'd not heard before.

She knew elephants, horses, gorillas and monkeys,
She knew snakes and Gnus and eurasian donkeys.

Since the day was warm and the child needed a nap,
We sat in the shade on a blanket with her head on my lap.

We ate our lunch as I watched our dreamer,
Who woke and ate hers then pointed up at a lemur.

"Julian" cried the child, "Thats right" cried her mother,
And I looked from one grandkid to another.

When we got home, the child ran to prove it.
In Madagascar, thats a Julian who likes to move-it moveit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 7, 2013 at 8:36 PM
CONGRATULATIONS WILLIAM, on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. Love ~SKAT~
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September 7, 2013 at 4:57 PM
William, , Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Nice seeing your poem on the front page... always~ Linda :)
Benassi Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 12:29 AM
Quite nice, charming.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 5:30 PM
This put a smile on my face that is still there. Mahalo and congrats on this little gem being featured William!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 8:34 AM
A LOVELY PIECE I ENJOYED
Culverhouse Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 7:28 PM
funny I love that lemur--move it, move it!!
Locksley Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 1:16 PM
This is adorable!
Sweetheart Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Thankxxx Will appreciate your sweet comments on my poetry today... hope u week is wonderful..with luv..always..
Bagnall Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 1:08 AM
Full of joy, full of fun, my kids do the same, thanks for the smiles.
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October 3, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Its so lovely to read you and congrat. On this gem!lady C,LOL!(tmfvs)
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October 2, 2010 at 3:21 PM
I watch these with Miranda ..A young seventh grader who comes to my home after school until her mother picks her up after work..Also, Caleb my grandson loves to watch the Madagascar, also..It is amazing what children learn these days from the movies, songs, and book to which they are exposed...I am glad that you wrote this one and I am glad that I chose it to read..Congratulations on your win in the contest...I was gladden at your kind comments on my work..Sara
Roberts Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 11:37 AM
adorable poem, congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 9:21 AM
What a joy to read William, and what pleasure you must get reading it to you grandkids. Many congratulations on your wonderful win >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 9:18 AM
Congrats Will on your big win in the Zoo contest.. a superb poem... enjoy your win this happy weekend..with luv...
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on your win William in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Tales From the Zoo". It is an honor to be on the winners list with you. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2010 at 4:51 AM
A delightful trip to the zoo, William. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 11:23 PM
Kids are so smart these days with their beautiful stories and shows on tv. Great poem. congratulations. Love, joyce
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September 23, 2010 at 10:40 PM
Congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest..Tales From the Zoo..I thought this one was just adorable...I love Julian..BG
Wilson Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 11:57 AM
very cute write..Take care~Deb
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September 15, 2010 at 4:38 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem today. Love Scarlett
A   Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 4:37 PM
lol love it, ah i really love that Julian character, enjoyed this one...P.D.
Dehaas Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 4:32 PM
Loved the madagascar reference haha
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