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No Jury In An Upside Down World

Red blood splashes on muddy terrain: ambushes booby traps fatigue jackets waiting for the enemy... 98 degrees in the sun, encountering and returning fire; life barely there and war’s longest refrain plays on. There is no jury within hostile grounds, despite patriotism caught between triggers as shadows of night weep for freedom’s balm; no courtroom, unlike before, to defend prisoners of the Wall, or Mekong… their scraped turmoil diluted over canned loaf and juice, unheard. Young knees deep in enemy ‘s clay… a voice ringing, “ Shoot!”, a motto of allegiance for homeland, while the instinct to live kicks, rams into higher gear… young soldiers too focused to see the eye of fear. Where is the jury within hostile ground? Only heaven can discern a topsy-turvy sense of man's unrighteousness... As war’s longest refrain plays on, and on. ```````````````````````````` John Hamilton's Upside Down World Contest Re-posted 3/7/2017 Written 3/21/2016

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Date: 4/10/2017 3:13:00 PM
Great write about the unjustness of war. Congratulations on your win Nette! :-)
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:36:00 PM
Powerful imagery, Nette! Great write! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/13/2017 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations nette!! Touching words my friend. Big Hugggs and love. deb
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Date: 3/13/2017 12:38:00 PM
"patriotism caught between triggers" Great line, congratulations Nette...
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Date: 3/12/2017 5:55:00 PM
Great writing as usual Nette, congrats on your great 2nd place win!
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Date: 3/22/2016 5:51:00 PM
"No Jury" !!! What a unique way of putting it. Such a sad, but apt description of the futility of war !! Well done dear Nette!
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Date: 3/22/2016 10:06:00 AM
A very poignant message. Good luck in the contest. It as an excellent movie.
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Date: 3/21/2016 12:40:00 PM
- A serious and sad topic, but beautiful written Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/21/2016 11:55:00 AM
Very sad picture in War life, really there's no jury in hostile grounds. God sees our patriotism in humanly world. Excellent poem filled with heartfelt utterance. A 7. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 3/21/2016 11:27:00 AM
Utterly massive poem so intense it kept my attention on the action, pain, rather than the mechanics of the writing!
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Date: 3/21/2016 11:11:00 AM
Astounding poem! You created a disturbing, clear voice that reaches out through the screen and beyond the grim reality of life and war!
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Date: 3/21/2016 10:55:00 AM
Awesome write, hard contest but you made your write flow so easily! hugs xx
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:59:00 PM
And back again to say grats on placing ;) :)

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