No Jury In An Upside Down World

Red blood splashes on muddy terrain:
ambushes   booby traps  fatigue jackets
waiting for the enemy... 98 degrees in the sun,
encountering and returning fire; life barely there
and  war’s  longest refrain plays on.

There is no jury within hostile grounds,
despite patriotism caught between triggers
as shadows of  night weep for freedom’s balm;
no courtroom, unlike before,  to defend prisoners 
of the Wall, or Mekong… their scraped turmoil 
diluted over canned loaf and juice, unheard.
Young knees deep in enemy ‘s clay…
a voice ringing, “ Shoot!”, a motto of allegiance
for homeland, while the instinct to live
kicks, rams into higher gear… young soldiers
too focused to see the eye of fear.
Where is the jury within hostile ground?
Only heaven can discern a topsy-turvy
sense of man's unrighteousness...

As war’s longest refrain plays on, and on.


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John Hamilton's Upside Down World Contest
Re-posted 3/7/2017
Written 3/21/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Martin Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Great write about the unjustness of war. Congratulations on your win Nette! :-)
Merryman Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 9:36 PM
Powerful imagery, Nette! Great write! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim
Burch Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations nette!! Touching words my friend. Big Hugggs and love. deb
Smith Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 12:38 PM
"patriotism caught between triggers" Great line, congratulations Nette...
Hamilton Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Great writing as usual Nette, congrats on your great 2nd place win!
Richards Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 5:51 PM
"No Jury" !!! What a unique way of putting it. Such a sad, but apt description of the futility of war !! Well done dear Nette!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 10:06 AM
A very poignant message. Good luck in the contest. It as an excellent movie.
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 12:40 PM
- A serious and sad topic, but beautiful written Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 11:55 AM
Very sad picture in War life, really there's no jury in hostile grounds. God sees our patriotism in humanly world. Excellent poem filled with heartfelt utterance. A 7. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Em Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Utterly massive poem so intense it kept my attention on the action, pain, rather than the mechanics of the writing!
Datu Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Astounding poem! You created a disturbing, clear voice that reaches out through the screen and beyond the grim reality of life and war!
Nance Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Awesome write, hard contest but you made your write flow so easily! hugs xx
Nance Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:59 PM
And back again to say grats on placing ;) :)
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