No Excuses Recited

There are no excuses
For the  mess in our world
The reasons for wars
Leaves my head in a whirl.

Why cant we live in peace
Why do we have to fight
There are no excuses
For not getting it right.

Our law makers
Should hide their head
The shame of their decisions
Leaving people dead 

We send our boys to fight
A cause we don't yearn
What excuse do we give
When they don't return

They die heroes what a farce
They gave their lives for an excuse so sparse.

..........  No more excuses ,too late ,they're dead..........


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 23, 2013 at 11:57 AM
This was a poem that also made me ponder and I agree with what you say here-- I really like your reading of this, especially of how you say your last line... super congrats to you, Seren :)!
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:52 PM
Thank you for taking the trouble of listening and commenting...Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:46 AM
Congratulations Seren, a wonderful write and recital xx
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:52 PM
Thanks Mandy for all your support...Seren
Dillard Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:21 AM
I love the message and the nice delivery. Well done! RAY
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:53 PM
Thank you Ray...Seren
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 11:43 PM
Seren, A beautifully poignant poem filled with the veracity ignored by the ones in power. You recited it wonderfully. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:53 PM
Thank you very much Connie.....Seren
May Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 8:53 PM
great write and win Seren....congrats
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Joseph..Seren
Richards Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 6:56 PM
An amazing poem on it's own accord, but added to the video reading......even more compelling!! Congratultions to you, Seren!!
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:55 PM
Aww Carrie thats nice of you, I thought yours was brilliant....Seren
A   Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 6:31 PM
Seren, :-) congratulations with your awesome Recited Poem.... Always~ PD
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:56 PM
thank you PD...Seren
Delaney Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 5:01 PM
Congratulations. It really added a special meaning to hear you recite it. SuZ
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Thanks Suzanne, glad you took the trouble to stop and listen ..Seren
Jerden Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 4:59 PM
Seren, your voice is so expressive and emotional! Congratulations! I guess you recited for another poet, too? Please comment on my latest blog to share your experience if you can.
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Thank you so much Roy glad to enjoyed it ...Seren
A  Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 11:59 AM
Seren, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Thanks very much i appreciate you stopping by.......................Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 3:25 AM
Excellent sentiments and well worth your winning spot. Congratulations xx
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Mandy
Guzzi Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 3:08 PM
What boggles the mind is how the testosterone in every generation plays right into the governments need to control the up and coming bucks and off they go while the old alphas sit at home safe winnowing the contenders.Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Thanks Debbie, they say the pen is mightier than the sword. Will have to find a pen army I guess.....Seren
May Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 8:04 AM
congrats on a great win Seren
Roberts Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Hi Joseph thank you ....... Seren
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January 11, 2013 at 6:14 AM
You nailed it Seren!...No excuse for war of any kind...congrats on the win - Tim
Roberts Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 11:27 AM
Hi Tim. Glad your thoughts are similar to mine .but even so. No one listens .....Seren
Johnson Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Great subject for the contest Seren. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 11:28 AM
Many tnanks Joyce ....Seren
A   Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 5:50 PM
Seren, nice to see you on Susan's winning list... always~ PD
Roberts Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 11:30 AM
Nice to be there P.D.......Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Congratulation Seren , a well deserved win here with this gem xx
Roberts Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Awwww Thanks Mandy, forgotten all about this one...Seren
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December 25, 2012 at 2:47 PM
wow, Seren, this asked the questions, and we never get the answers, but i've alway said, today, any aspect on this plant,take the reason a part, analyse it, and behind it all will be a profit for some one,,I like this poem, and i like your attitude, not just here but in all your poetry......
Roberts Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 5:31 PM
Thank you Harry for your kind words...Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 1:42 PM
Hi Sass you are such a good person with your warm heart, love this xx
Roberts Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Hi Mandy, hope you had a fab day. You going to hit the sales.....Seren
Ellison Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 9:43 AM
With your words, Seren, you echo the mood I'm in today! Check out my "A Christmas Wish" Love, Jack
Roberts Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 5:33 PM
Thanks Jack , hope your day wasnt too much of a strain. Seren
West Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 4:02 PM
Hi Seren, what a great write, and hits especially close to home. Outstanding job my friend. Rollo
Roberts Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 4:35 PM
Hello Rollo I wrote it for all countries, for all the service men. But for me the Brits especially. Time for them all to come home.
Williams Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Seren a very strong message, lets hope the right people are hearing it...Buon Natale my friend..have a peaceful time...David
Roberts Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Dafydd it seems the obvious is blind to those in power. None so blind than those that don't want to see. Hope 2013 brings health to your family and peace of mind. ..Seren
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