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No butterflies dance

Joyless the reflection from earth to heaven when winds snarl and bite demons roar at midnight No butterflies dance neither doe nor fawn play The tweet of bird is unheard snow-covered life dormant lays Yet as my lips turn to yours the miraculous occurs All sadness' dispelled ~ our two hearts in bliss meld

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Date: 2/20/2020 3:39:00 PM
The power of a kiss Gershon. I like your poetry style.
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Date: 2/20/2020 8:43:00 PM
Charlie, appreciate your encouragement! Thanks, Gershon
Date: 2/10/2020 12:15:00 PM
The contrast of winter and coziness - cannot be told enough!
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Date: 2/10/2020 1:02:00 PM
I have a feeling that the winter/cozy contrast may just wear a wee bit threadbare this year. Hope not, though. Thanks, Caren! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 2/10/2020 8:06:00 AM
I like how you brought colour to a dismal landscape.
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Date: 2/10/2020 11:27:00 AM
Gotta do something about the winter blahs ~ Gershon
Date: 2/9/2020 11:45:00 PM
What a warm and cozy love scene has been created against the backdrop of brutal weather. I love the title, too. Very nice, Gershon! :)
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Date: 2/10/2020 11:26:00 AM
No love out of doors, so have to create some indoors, I guess. Thanks, Evelyn. :) Gershon
Date: 2/9/2020 9:32:00 PM
You two butterflies start your dance..dormant lays are best for love..Great imagery and rhyme..
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Date: 2/10/2020 11:24:00 AM
Appreciate the support, Jenish. Cheers, Gerson
Date: 2/9/2020 9:11:00 PM
Rich ink my friend. Wonderful piece. xomo
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Date: 2/10/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thanks for the support, Maureen! :) gw
Date: 2/9/2020 7:08:00 PM
Lovely poem, Gershon.
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Date: 2/10/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line! :) gw
Date: 2/9/2020 6:31:00 PM
This is such a lovely piece - it lays out a chilly scene and brings it to a warm, loving conclusion! Sweet! Well done, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 2/9/2020 6:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement, Pandita. Nice to see your avatar again! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 2/9/2020 6:15:00 PM
Isn't that what cold nights are for? lol Nicely penned, Gershon.
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Date: 2/9/2020 6:40:00 PM
Absolutely. Cold night, warm fire, hot kisses! Thanks, Daniel! ~ 'Romeo Roy'