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No Apparent Finale

Man's addiction to currents
to motion in general
why the sea is so popular
a write, moving clouds such
fond vehicles for floating 
daydreams

really, we are never still
aging while sleeping
drawn toward spirit alone
perhaps knows where~ no
seven day rest an apparent 
finale

Copyright © Joe Dimino | Year Posted 2023

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Gershon Wolf Date: 3/29/2023 7:19:00 PM I really like where this poem moves, Joe. Bravo! ~ Gershon Login to Reply Joe Dimino Date: 3/30/2023 9:19:00 AM Hi Gershon; life is a journey. And Heaven a place of endless new experience. But what do I know?

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/29/2023 1:38:00 AM No use complaining. We age even when we sleep. Login to Reply Joe Dimino Date: 3/29/2023 5:13:00 AM It does no good, does it? -- though sometimes a good shout or groan, is the right tone. I never question another's depth of pain, being of service when I can. Like you say, we age, and must make the best of it -- don't let the Devil hear us creak, giving him greater satisfaction. The Grim Reaper will know that I was a good counter-puncher.

Speaks Volumes Date: 3/28/2023 7:52:00 PM Joe, I wish I hadn't become so motionless , sitting here writing poems for more of the day than I should. Your analogy of the way nature moves is wonderful Joe. Login to Reply Joe Dimino Date: 3/29/2023 5:21:00 AM Words, stories, now-a-days, have legs and motion like never before. The internet travels...our spirits touching and entering the consciousness and lives of others around the world. If anything, by writing (deeply questioning and feeling) we are getting our own minds straight-- when the mind is straight, the heart and soul are straight, direct links with our Loving Father.

Peter Rees Date: 3/28/2023 9:35:00 AM A very interesting and thoughtful write. Motion all about on our little planet , even ageing as we sleep and then the finale. Mmm thanks for sharing Login to Reply Joe Dimino Date: 3/28/2023 9:41:00 AM Hi Peter; thank you for reading. I realize that I know little, and find myself asking more questions than answering many -- perhaps my writing more about the journey. Blessings my friend.