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No Apparent Finale

Man's addiction to currents to motion in general why the sea is so popular a write, moving clouds such fond vehicles for floating daydreams really, we are never still aging while sleeping drawn toward spirit alone perhaps knows where~ no seven day rest an apparent finale

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/29/2023 7:19:00 PM

I really like where this poem moves, Joe. Bravo! ~ Gershon

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/30/2023 9:19:00 AM

Hi Gershon; life is a journey. And Heaven a place of endless new experience. But what do I know?

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/29/2023 1:38:00 AM

No use complaining. We age even when we sleep.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/29/2023 5:13:00 AM

It does no good, does it? -- though sometimes a good shout or groan, is the right tone. I never question another's depth of pain, being of service when I can. Like you say, we age, and must make the best of it -- don't let the Devil hear us creak, giving him greater satisfaction. The Grim Reaper will know that I was a good counter-puncher.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/28/2023 7:52:00 PM

Joe, I wish I hadn't become so motionless , sitting here writing poems for more of the day than I should. Your analogy of the way nature moves is wonderful Joe.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/29/2023 5:21:00 AM

Words, stories, now-a-days, have legs and motion like never before. The internet travels...our spirits touching and entering the consciousness and lives of others around the world. If anything, by writing (deeply questioning and feeling) we are getting our own minds straight-- when the mind is straight, the heart and soul are straight, direct links with our Loving Father.

Peter Rees

Date: 3/28/2023 9:35:00 AM

A very interesting and thoughtful write. Motion all about on our little planet , even ageing as we sleep and then the finale. Mmm thanks for sharing

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/28/2023 9:41:00 AM

Hi Peter; thank you for reading. I realize that I know little, and find myself asking more questions than answering many -- perhaps my writing more about the journey. Blessings my friend.