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No-Name No: 18

The world burns apart,
like paper over candle.
The only breaking point 
that this planet couldn't handle.
Something turns to nothing
and that nothing's what remains,
that nothing turns to something
and that something turns to days.
Days are made of moments.
Moments; made of you,
moments make up hours
and together we make two.
We co-create a world
and pretend we're here forever,
let's break apart the pieces
come on, let's tear it down together!
This world was made to murder us
this world was made of fire,
we were born to join a homicide
and born pre-expired.
Time didn't want us,
we pretend we're here forever,
let's break apart the pieces
come on, let's tear it down together!
Our minds are vast and lonely
instant pleasure keeps us lifted,
it's no wonder every human
has to leave this world addicted.
God says He wants us.
We pretend we're here forever,
lets break apart the pieces
come on, let's tear it down together!
You're simple and distracting,
I say "I love you" out of habit.
I only care for you on impulse,
sorry, I'm simply just an addict.
I'm simply just a human
simply made to last forever.
Our purpose in this world is simple;
let's tear it down,

you and I.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/11/2016 10:12:00 PM
divine in every line
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Patrick Farley IV
Date: 4/11/2016 10:58:00 PM
Appreciate you taking the time to read some of my work! Thank you!
Date: 4/11/2016 10:12:00 PM
divine in every line
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:04:00 AM
Good job of portraying your inner feelings. I liked the honesty!
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Patrick Farley IV
Date: 8/6/2013 10:32:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed the honest of this poem. thank you!
Date: 8/6/2013 7:08:00 AM
- A proficient poem Patrick, well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Patrick Farley IV
Date: 8/6/2013 10:31:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/5/2013 8:32:00 PM
Holy cow! This is OUTSTANDING! I love the repetition of lines, makes it sound almost like a song! To say the least- it's going straight into my list of favorites!
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Patrick Farley IV
Date: 8/6/2013 6:04:00 AM
Awesome, thank you for the feedback on this one! And I'm honored to have this added to your favorites!
Date: 8/5/2013 7:50:00 PM
What can I say... exceptional poetry Patrick! Cheers!
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Patrick Farley IV
Date: 8/6/2013 6:03:00 AM
Thank you jack! Much appreciated
Date: 8/5/2013 5:21:00 PM
Very impressive poetic talent..you rocked your subject perfectly......love the energy you reflect:)
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Patrick Farley IV
Date: 8/5/2013 5:29:00 PM
Thanks Karen! I'm glad you felt that energy
Date: 8/5/2013 2:56:00 AM
wow i am wowed at the use of words and the depths of the whole!beautiful job
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Patrick Farley IV
Date: 8/5/2013 5:29:00 PM
Thank you for reading and the compliment! I appreciate it!