Seren Roberts Poet Limerick

Nirvana - Bawdy Contest

there was a young man from Havana
whose joystick was like a banana
every girl wants to feel
when they did it would squeal
kiss me quick we will reach Nirvana*


*state of blissful repose


Penned 5th May 2014

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Poet Destroyer A June 14, 2014 at 12:22 AM Seren,, :) Congratulations, on your win. "Luv Linda"

Sara Kendrick June 9, 2014 at 6:13 PM I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara Seren Roberts June 10, 2014 at 12:07 PM thank you Sarah, thank you ...Seren

Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 4:46 PM Tooooo funny. Many congra'ts on your win, Seren. Elaine Seren Roberts June 10, 2014 at 12:09 PM thank you Elaine glad it brought a smile to your face ...Seren

Richard Lamoureux June 8, 2014 at 8:49 AM I guess this really is monkey business. Congrats. Seren Roberts June 8, 2014 at 3:32 PM Lol u think so. ...Seren

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 7:34 AM Seren, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~ Seren Roberts June 8, 2014 at 3:34 PM Thank you SKAT .....Seren

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2014 at 10:04 PM Hey, seeing this one near the end of my comments on that winner list. I think this is another one that I'd like to see higher placed. It's pretty darn good!! Congrats on your win, Seren. Seren Roberts June 8, 2014 at 3:35 PM Thank you Andrea well I was placed so that's good.... Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta June 7, 2014 at 9:58 PM Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, seren Seren Roberts June 8, 2014 at 3:36 PM Thank you Ram ... Seren

Tim Smith May 5, 2014 at 12:50 PM Hahahaha....Very humorous Seren Seren Roberts May 5, 2014 at 3:53 PM glad u laughed at it ...seren

Casarah Nance May 4, 2014 at 10:57 PM Genius! oh I laughed out loud, well done, good luck in the contest! Seren Roberts May 4, 2014 at 11:20 PM oh my have been worried about it. Am so glad you realised what I meant.. Thank you Casarah ....Seren