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Nimbus-Thunder-Lune

Nimbus- Thunder-Lune

         nimbus

           cumulonimbus
           clouds collide
            in scorching summer.

                                                    5-3-5 syllables

                thunder

               lightning flash:
               thunderstorm with hail
                        tornedos                        
 
                                                      3- 5 -3         syllables                       
 
   10/ 19/ 21
 
 Lune (Mixed Pair)
 
 Contest by Willium Kekaula

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Constance La France

Date: 10/22/2021 3:25:00 PM

Anisha, very nice Lune haiku, best of luck in the contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Joseph May

Date: 10/20/2021 5:57:00 PM

A collision for stormy weather, Very nicely penned Anisha

Jan Allison

Date: 10/19/2021 8:50:00 AM

oh how quickly the weather can turn, excellent ink Anisha:-) hugs jan xx