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Nimbeltockie and Ragamoo

The Nimbeltockie sag a poo. Long before the Ragamoo Brake the rapon names a loo. Barred the Lala Sot. Would you? Came the hora Ratterscamps Running through the flinterdamps, Chasing Nimbeltockie folks. Magling pashatasing jokes. Gone the Nimbletockie potters Outed by Ratterscamps, the squatters. Feasted on by Ragamoo And a Lala Sot or two. Then a Nimbeltockie hero Fanned the fropper, unlike Nero. Rammed the wooden loli-dagger Into Ratterscamps with swagger. Sang the old, old song of Poo Perhaps you’d like to sing it too. Nimbeltockie and Ragamoo Twaggled in the twain. Would you? The Nimbeltockie sag a poo Long before the Ragamoo Brake the rapon names a loo. Barred the Lala Sot. Would you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/20/2011 2:56:00 AM
I was intrigued by the title. This poem is very "Jabberwocky-esque." Nonsense can be poetic! I guess this is for a contest? Regards, Robert.
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Date: 6/19/2011 1:05:00 PM
Very cool satire on Jabberwocky, Joyce. Deb is going to love this one! Great rhyme, meter and very clever new words coined. Way to go, dear. I could not find any inspiration for this contest, but did try. The poems were just to embarrassing to post. Hope to see you at the top! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2011 11:53:00 PM
you razzle dazzled me, joyce... winner for deb's or PD's contest... :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/18/2011 8:50:00 PM
wow Joyce a different flavor for u and luv the names and vocabulary used to convey the theme .. an enjoyable read ..
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:37:00 PM
HAHAHA, a nonsense poem that actually had consistency with repeating lines. so is this for the Alice in Wonderfuland contest? It reminds me a bit of my Jabborwacky poem. That's sweet of you to tell me that you wait for the comments last with me, Joyce.
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:21:00 PM
Though intriguing and awesome, I enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2011 5:59:00 PM
hahahaha. Whatever language this is, I love this poem. Gnome or golem maybe? lol. Well done on a well-delivered piece. :))
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