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Nighttime Musings

Through the louvered window
The moonlight slips in furtively
Barring her flawless suntanned skin
Musky fragrance pervades the air
Stirring the mind with anticipation
Mellow sensual intoxication.

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Contest: Night time Musings
Sponsor: FJ Thomas

Copyright © Paul Callus | Year Posted 2015

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Timothy Hicks Date: 2/16/2016 12:27:00 AM Very vivid and sensual. I like how you perceive moonlight "slipping in", almost like a thief, and that your musings allude to something more ... much enjoyed. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 2/16/2016 11:48:00 AM Thank you for enjoying, Timothy; it was meant to be sensually suggestive, but never crossing boundaries. ~ Regards // paul

Legendary Legend Date: 1/8/2016 1:02:00 AM awesome and captivating. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/8/2016 5:50:00 PM Many thanks LL. Love your complimentary comments! Regards // paul

CayCay Jennings Date: 1/4/2016 2:32:00 PM Great visual and olfactory stimulation - Well done, I quite enjoyed it ... CayCay Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/4/2016 3:22:00 PM Both sight and smell can be very stimulating, CayCay. So pleased that you enjoyed! Thank you for this and other welcome visits:) ~~ paul

James Inman Date: 1/3/2016 9:39:00 AM Strong imagery Paul. I feel like she's standing in front of me. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/3/2016 2:59:00 PM Thank you for stopping by with nice comments, James. ~ Regards // paul

Debbie Duncan Date: 12/30/2015 12:06:00 AM Very nice win Paul, thanks for coming to read my White Birch. Happy New Year to you :) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/30/2015 1:13:00 PM Thank you, Debbie! May the new year bring you happiness and lovely inspiration:) ~ Regards ~ paul

Skat A Date: 12/29/2015 6:04:00 PM PAUL, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/30/2015 1:11:00 PM Thank you, Skat. May the new year bring you love, happiness and peace. ~ hugs ~ paul

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/29/2015 5:29:00 PM Nice and sensual, Paul. Congrats to be on the list. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/30/2015 1:09:00 PM Thank you, Andrea. Both ours were Honeyed & Mellow:) ~ paul

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/29/2015 4:28:00 AM I enjoyed your musings Paul, good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/29/2015 6:42:00 AM Pleased that you enjoyed, Richard. Thank you. Wishing you all the best for 2016. ~ Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/29/2015 1:22:00 AM Wow Paul how lovely..a super 7.. congrats on fine win! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/29/2015 6:20:00 AM The wow and high rating are truly appreciated, Upma:) Thank you! ~ Regards // paul

Susan Gentry Date: 12/28/2015 8:16:00 PM Congratulations! Very very nicely done :) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/29/2015 6:17:00 AM Glad you liked it, Susan...thank you! Have a nice day. ~ paul

Viv Wigley Date: 12/28/2015 7:31:00 PM Quick, Paul, go grab a strong mug of coffee, before you lose control! Congratulations on your simmering little piece. Regards, Viv Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/29/2015 5:44:00 AM Viv, incidentally, at the moment I AM drinking a mug of strong black coffee! Thank you for reading, and liking. ~ Regards // paul

Michael Tor Date: 12/28/2015 6:05:00 PM Congratulations Paul on your win! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/29/2015 5:41:00 AM Thank you, Michael! All the best. // paul

John Lawless Date: 12/28/2015 3:45:00 PM The hint of "come hither". Nicely done Paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 4:45:00 PM Thank you John. ~ Wishing you all the best...paul

Frederic Parker Date: 12/28/2015 3:34:00 PM Congratulations Paul for a well deserved win Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 4:44:00 PM Thank you, Frederic; yours is a worthy top placement! Regards // paul

Jan Allison Date: 12/28/2015 1:10:00 PM really loved this one Paul congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 4:37:00 PM Thank you Jan. Most winning entries are truly of a high standard. Hugs // paul

Beautiful Scars Date: 12/28/2015 1:03:00 PM Paul, congrats on your win! You always say so much in such short words..Loved iy *smiles* -luloo Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 4:40:00 PM Thank you, Laura:) I'm pleased with the result; it was no easy contest to judge. ~ Warm regards // paul

Hija De La Luna Date: 12/28/2015 6:59:00 AM Sensually captivating piece, Paul! I think I got intoxicated. Love it! - Maria Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 4:28:00 PM Thank you for liking, Maria! Beware of over-intoxication:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/28/2015 5:58:00 AM truly a sizzler that intoxicates, paul... this is really better than mine!..huggs Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 4:17:00 PM I am pleased that you like it, Nette, but I really liked yours more than mine:) Hugs // paul

Elaine George Date: 12/28/2015 5:07:00 AM The mystical moon and all her power. Beautiful picture you paint here, Paul. All the best to you In the New Year. Sincerely, Elaine Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 4:05:00 PM Glad you liked this short poem, Elaine. Thank you for a lovely visit. ~ May I also wish you a happy and serene 2016. ~ Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/28/2015 4:31:00 AM - Lovely ...... and yes, sensual - Good luck in contest - Best wishes for a peaceful and happy new year, Paul ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 4:02:00 PM Thank you Anne Lise:) Another year coming to an end! May the new one also bring peace and happiness to you and your loved ones! Hugs ~ paul

Eileen Manassian Date: 12/28/2015 12:29:00 AM We need to collab again, my dear. You are so good with sensuality. It's just.....refreshing. Loved this piece, Paul....You are amazing. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 3:28:00 PM There will be time for more collabs, dear Eileen:) In the meantime I will bathe in your generous praise:) Thank you for the lovely comments! Hugs // paul [ps...hope you entered our co-write for the contest!)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/27/2015 7:52:00 PM Paul, short verse with your well-known kick but this time it's romantic and sassy.. =`) hehehehe Happy New YEar!!~Olive Eloisa =`) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 3:13:00 PM Thank you Olive_eloi:) I could have done better, but was pressed for time! ~ All the best for 2016 and all the new exciting ventures that lie ahead:) Hugs & Smilesss ~ paul

Jan Allison Date: 12/27/2015 5:42:00 PM very sensual Paul good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/28/2015 8:51:00 AM It is a very busy time of the year - I have written rewritten and rewritten my poem but it is not good enough for the contest so I probably won't post it:-( hugs jan xx Paul Callus Date: 12/28/2015 8:48:00 AM Thank you, Jan. Wrote this just before going to bed last night, on realizing that Flo's contest was about to get filled! This week I have spent little time at home; going out again in half an hour's time. Hugs // paul