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What is that vague shadow-play Roaming through the dark of clay, Night's creature, perhaps, around? Yet mild grunts …a dulcet sound. A fawn! Echoes awaken This breath my woes forsaken : How glorious a deer's rite Shadow-play of hushed moonlight! Jueju-Qijue With A Twist Contest For charles messina 3/15/2019

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Date: 4/17/2019 5:53:00 AM
Nette, such a wonderful poem. I had to place this one at the bottom because the first words of the second stanza had to start with the last words of the first stanza. Loved the poem...hugs Charlie
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Date: 3/23/2019 8:16:00 PM
Had to "Fav"; best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/15/2019 5:09:00 PM
I see that fawn in your wonderful poem in hushed moonlight..lovely write, as always.
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Date: 3/15/2019 4:37:00 PM
Breathtaking imagery, Nette! Wishing you success in Charlie's contest, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2019 4:33:00 PM
- A beautiful animal in the dark, Nette :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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