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Necklace around heaven, nose drinks from studded chill, no fallen seed where she named raven in her stars; needless brooms how wash tears, nor nightingale feat this nigh movement in Sun's cast

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Date: 5/23/2025 5:13:00 PM
This is starlight woven into verse--enigmatic and mesmerizing. "Named raven in her stars" and "necklace around heaven" are such striking, mythic images. It reads like a spell whispered to the night itself.
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Date: 10/24/2024 12:05:00 PM
Wow your way with words truly is so unique and imaginative sweet paige! Left me in awe hooked from the very first line as you wrote “ necklace around heaven” wow what a line! “ named raven in her stars;” thats just beyond creative! Pleasure reading your work always
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Date: 10/20/2024 5:27:00 PM
Night is a ' Necklace around heaven. ' I never thought about it in that way. So mysterious, yet magical and spiritual all at the same time. My best to you, Paige. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 10/19/2024 8:50:00 PM
Such amazing depth so well written, Paige! Blessings!
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Date: 10/19/2024 11:09:00 AM
I am thinking this one is not for my contest since I didn't give night as one of the titles so I can read it. I agree with Charlotte. This is certainly intriguing and deep. Just as the night is.
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Date: 10/19/2024 5:48:00 AM
accomplished, intriguing and deep, as your writes usually are...good to read you again :)
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Date: 10/19/2024 3:28:00 AM
This one is deep and great use of the letter N with dark imagery... you described the night very well..
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Date: 10/19/2024 1:20:00 AM
Great comments. Writing Pleiades is not as easy as one thinks. I wrote a few, but I seem to have lost interest.
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Date: 10/18/2024 11:06:00 PM
mystically written with images like raven in her stars, nigh movement, studded chills...I super like this, paige!
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Date: 10/18/2024 4:46:00 PM
Your poetry is deep. Read twice and still contemplating. Nice Pleiades. Must be a contest seeing a lot of these
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