Nightmares

A slice of light strains in vain
through murky glass,  
pouring shadows into corners like spilled ink.
Dust floats and coats the acrid air,
white with stale light.  
The room is always grey, always silent... at first.
Until the silence breaks---
splintering like snapped wood.
  
A spindle without thread 
drops from nowhere, rolls in karmic circles 
across the floorboards in my head.
It stops at my feet; I bend to pick it up. 
But when I open my palm,
it's gone--
And in its place I find an hourglass

Then - suddenly - I'm encased
in a giant vial of glass, 
swallowed up by quicksand
that turns to sinking ash.
I bang bruised fists against glass walls,
but the more I thrash,
the deeper I fall.
I open my mouth to scream---

And I'm a china doll, 
sitting on a dusty shelf -
paralyzed, demoralized,
with flimsy limbs, expression grim.

All I can do is stare
until morning's glare 
answers my prayers
and wakes me up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horstkotter Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 7:22 PM
Very good poem. Enjoyed the read.
Jordan Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 10:23 PM
Nice work! I especially like the variety of rhymes, some internal, some not. The imagery is very strong too; I can taste the dust in the air. Jack
Zerbst Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 8:02 AM
It seems like you always do a unique take on these contests. Even the narrowing of the lines seems to have an effect that adds to the poem.
A A Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Very well written. Good Luck.
Chircop Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 2:59 AM
Outstanding post dear Heather
Breidenthal Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 9:54 PM
Awesome one, Heather! I was truly enraptured in this one, and it chilled me to the bone--a good thing? YES. :D Always, Laura
Lamoureux Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Ooow, this is freaky! Good but freaky. I see a big win in my crystal ball over beside your China doll amongst all those other needful things. Well done! This is a piece I can see Stephen king writing in one of his books.
Horsman Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 2:55 PM
Wow, you certainly bring your nightmare to life, Heather... this is wonderful poetry...
Hunter Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:43 PM
Freaky stuff, Heather....I'm scairt!...ha. Good luck in this contest! I dreamed the other night that Frankenstein came over to visit, but I had to kick him out because he kept breakin' stuff. Then he got mad and killed my neighbor....what the heck?!
Ober Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Haha! You should write a poem about that ;)
Guzzi Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:22 PM
So nice to read your verse this morning. Light & Love
Sivey Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 10:25 AM
This is a powerful expressive write! I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! Great Work!!
Manassian Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Heather, my dear. What amazing talent you have. I am amazed by your command of words and how you weave them into this tale that leaves one with a uneasy feeling. Hope this is just an exercise on word mastery, my dear! Great write! Hugs!
Manassian Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Heather, my dear. What amazing talent you have. I am amazed by your command of words and how you weave them into this tale that leaves one with a uneasy feeling. Hope this is just an exercise on word mastery, my dear! Great write! Hugs!
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