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Nightmare

Gaze into my everlasting nightmare
Look to the ash-filled skies
Blanketed with gloomy, dour mist
A never deceasing fog scouring
This dreary meadow of mine
In which 
Thorny vines grow generously and strike
Me mercilessly
Pushing me into
A sea of leeches
That suck the life out of me
…or what’s left of it

A wave of remorse and suffering 
Swallowing me 
Watching me be devoured
As my nightmare diminishes not
Leave me to rot, love, leave me to rot

The parasites are eating me
The vermin are carrying me away
In frag ments… in piec e s…
Watch as every part of me is eaten
Do not curse them
For they are doing me a great favor

You’ll get through this without me
And find that you will benefit as well
Though nightmares dim
Like darkness meeting light
This nightmare does not leave
It stays forever concealed
Inside a heart that beats not
A heart that is damn-aged
And will not mend
But will long and loath 
…until the very end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/21/2012 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:39:00 PM
Laura, First, I love the photo of the cat. Secondly, You have a superb poem here. You really captured the essence of a nightmare. I really enjoyed it. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:47:00 PM
Nicely written Laura...congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations Laura a well deserved win xx
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Date: 2/19/2012 9:23:00 PM
congrats Laura on a great win for this dreamy delight luv..
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:52:00 PM
LAURA.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/22/2012 12:08:00 PM
Thank you very much (:
Date: 11/19/2011 9:44:00 PM
Dear Laura, YOU continue to Amaze me with YOUR Fasinating WORDS I really like the Line - "A heart that is "Damn-aged"" With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 6/29/2011 10:50:00 PM
beautiful verse
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Date: 6/28/2011 7:57:00 PM
ARE YOU SERIOUS! this made me freak out it was so good p.s. me likey
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