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Nightmare

Sleep for most is a time to dream As they drift off without despair But for some its too extreme As all it brings is a nightmare They are filled with gloom and fear As they become prisoners of the night The bogeyman is always there To make them scream in fright They are trapped within this horror show Where the nightmare king is in control It's Freddy Krueger on the go and screams alone won't save their soul 3-22-2023 Writing Challenge - 'N' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/27/2023 8:40:00 AM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - 'N' Words. Your poem is wonderful, so sorry about the delay in commenting, blessings
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Date: 3/24/2023 11:45:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs
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Date: 3/23/2023 1:46:00 AM
You have described it well, Joseph:)
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Joseph May
Date: 3/23/2023 7:55:00 PM
Thank you Jo
Date: 3/22/2023 5:42:00 PM
Keep those nightmares far away from me. Dreams, on the other hand, let me linger in them all day. You paint such vivid images with your words. Good luck in the contest, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy
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Joseph May
Date: 3/22/2023 8:13:00 PM
I hope your dreams are always sweet Brandy, Thanks, hugs
Date: 3/22/2023 2:57:00 PM
Joseph, your illustration of those awful dreams is just excellent. Good luck with the contest.
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Joseph May
Date: 3/22/2023 3:11:00 PM
Thank you Sotto
Date: 3/22/2023 1:02:00 PM
A wonderful write/story. Can I put in for sweet dreams??? Oh please!!! Have a great/blessed day as you write away..............
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Joseph May
Date: 3/22/2023 3:10:00 PM
Sweet dreams coming up for you Paula, Thanks
Date: 3/22/2023 9:27:00 AM
Those dreadful nightmares--so well illustrated, Joseph. Best to you.
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Joseph May
Date: 3/22/2023 3:11:00 PM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 3/22/2023 9:05:00 AM
Nightmare is food for horror writers.
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Joseph May
Date: 3/22/2023 3:10:00 PM
Yes it sure is, Thanks Victor
Date: 3/22/2023 6:26:00 AM
Reads as if you may have some experience with this topic, Joseph. The Dr told me to quit eating so late at night:) Good luck my friend.
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Joseph May
Date: 3/22/2023 3:09:00 PM
No experience on the topic, just my muse at work, Thanks Daniel
Date: 3/22/2023 6:01:00 AM
- I don't want to meet Freddy Krueger in my nightmares :))) - A great poem, Joseph - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Joseph May
Date: 3/22/2023 3:08:00 PM
No one wants to meet Freddy, Thanks Anne, hugs

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