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Nightlife

As the moon wafts a brilliant smile Stars wink in reaction for miles Gently night tucks in Darkness settles in with silence Nocturnal beings residence Till sunrise ascends

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2012 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Debra. Love Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2012 9:34:00 AM

Great rhyming on this winning work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 5:03:00 PM

Debra, ., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/4/2012 1:43:00 PM

Congratulations Debra love xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/4/2012 8:36:00 AM

This is very good. Congrats on win.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/3/2012 7:58:00 PM

You wrote a beauty Deb, I don't have the discipline to fit myself into a style but sure admire those who can!

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/20/2012 1:19:00 PM

a very lovely poem, and its ur first attemt at this form. Sound amaizing to me.

Ronny Madonsela
Date: 5/20/2012 1:20:00 PM

i just had to read it for the second time. And congrats on that contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2012 2:01:00 PM

A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Debra. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/15/2012 5:12:00 AM

enjoyed the night scenes, debra... congrats on your win!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2012 9:02:00 PM

YOurs is sure awesome for your first one, Debra. I like it a lot. Congrats on your win.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/14/2012 6:49:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Debra. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going. Thanks for your comment. Hugs, Ralph

Kash Poet

Date: 5/14/2012 11:44:00 AM

Beautifulimagery here Debra!Congrats on your win.

David Williams

Date: 5/14/2012 11:28:00 AM

Deb congrats on your win..David

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/14/2012 11:27:00 AM

Well Done Debra...Congratulations on your Win!!! big hugs, love ya deb

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/5/2012 10:59:00 AM

you painted the scene beautifuly . A great write. RONNY

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/1/2012 9:39:00 AM

what a moonlit feel, debra; not bad at all. it's a soft, mellow tune; like it!..:) winning huggs!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/30/2012 9:23:00 PM

Nice lunar mood you paint here Debbie, you are brave to attempt these forms; I just stick to the usual and that seems a challenge! :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 4/30/2012 12:07:00 PM

Natural meter, that's my game. With never a line that is the same. I've never been one for dictation. Some think I have a lazy reputation. But I enjoy the fruits of your labor. I just don't know how to wield that saber.

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 4/28/2012 12:40:00 PM

Very nice pice, like it! xoxo - Laila

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/28/2012 4:10:00 AM

excellent first time try Debra, the first stanza is outstanding. harry

Dan Kearley

Date: 4/27/2012 9:38:00 PM

Very nice! :o) I'm not sure if I could do that form? Maybe some day I'll give it a try.Thanks for your comments. :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2012 2:35:00 PM

Well done and well written Debra, I love it. - Have a beautiful weekend, take care. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 4/27/2012 2:20:00 PM

nice one dear

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/27/2012 1:20:00 PM

Good on you for trying a new form. You did an excellent job on this write. love phyl

John Rhinem

Date: 4/27/2012 11:37:00 AM

Smile ˜ I like that verse, 'Till sunlight descends.' ˜ Made myself envision cascading light like rain pouring through trees to dance upon the soil; twined ˜ Glitter from fingertips grasping the sky to eclipse ˜ Sooo beautiful baby girl * My love to You, John!:) ˜