Nightlife

Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Debra. Love Carol

Great rhyming on this winning work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Debra, ., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

Congratulations Debra love xx

This is very good. Congrats on win.

You wrote a beauty Deb, I don't have the discipline to fit myself into a style but sure admire those who can!

a very lovely poem, and its ur first attemt at this form. Sound amaizing to me.

A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Debra. Love, Carol

enjoyed the night scenes, debra... congrats on your win!..:) huggs

YOurs is sure awesome for your first one, Debra. I like it a lot. Congrats on your win.

Congrats on your win, Debra. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going. Thanks for your comment. Hugs, Ralph

Beautifulimagery here Debra!Congrats on your win.

Deb congrats on your win..David

Well Done Debra...Congratulations on your Win!!! big hugs, love ya deb

you painted the scene beautifuly . A great write. RONNY

what a moonlit feel, debra; not bad at all. it's a soft, mellow tune; like it!..:) winning huggs!

Nice lunar mood you paint here Debbie, you are brave to attempt these forms; I just stick to the usual and that seems a challenge! :)

Natural meter, that's my game. With never a line that is the same. I've never been one for dictation. Some think I have a lazy reputation. But I enjoy the fruits of your labor. I just don't know how to wield that saber.

Very nice pice, like it! xoxo - Laila

excellent first time try Debra, the first stanza is outstanding. harry

Very nice! :o) I'm not sure if I could do that form? Maybe some day I'll give it a try.Thanks for your comments. :o)

Well done and well written Debra, I love it. - Have a beautiful weekend, take care. - oxox love Anne-Lise

nice one dear

Good on you for trying a new form. You did an excellent job on this write. love phyl

Smile ˜ I like that verse, 'Till sunlight descends.' ˜ Made myself envision cascading light like rain pouring through trees to dance upon the soil; twined ˜ Glitter from fingertips grasping the sky to eclipse ˜ Sooo beautiful baby girl * My love to You, John!:) ˜