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Nightingale

Loneliness fills each restless night, as the world turns so quiet I wish to surrender to my love and kiss her internal sound could I prolong, and cry out longer with a haunting nightingale song 1/14/15

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2015 6:32:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..Very impressive personification of the Nightingale..Wonderful winning work..Congrats..Sara

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/21/2015 11:25:00 PM

I just love this Frederic,congrats on the win...huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/21/2015 8:22:00 AM

...kiss her internal sound...now that is one incredible line, though I love it all...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/20/2015 10:14:00 PM

Wonderfully done ,, although sad and emotive, superb write Frederic ! Congrats on fine win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2015 7:35:00 PM

I don't have time to do much tonight, so I came here to see if you won the contest. I see congrats from Debs, so I am glad you made the winners' list. CONGRATS. this one deserved it.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/20/2015 7:32:00 PM

You know I don't think I have ever heard one? Congrad's on your win. Light & love

Paul Callus

Date: 1/20/2015 3:18:00 PM

The romantic nightingale's song inspires a beautiful write, Frederic. Second nightingale theme I have seen so far and it merits being a winner; congratulations! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 1/20/2015 2:26:00 PM

Absolutely delightful Frederic many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2015 11:07:00 PM

hauntingly beautiful, Frederic! you chose well your subject in this contest.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/14/2015 3:18:00 PM

Your use of simple words and ideas are easy to digest and strike a common cord of familiarity. Emile.