Night Wings

Satin moonlight spills through the birch bark branches accenting moths, that rise like small embers from grassy burrows Soft-winged petals circle in small constellations tethered in mid-air These meadow angels, cluster in clouds like flowers White silk wing-tips, gilded with August moonlight, unfold nimbly, anxiously star-struck, seeking solace in moonlight
___________________________________________________________ For Brian Strand's Contest: 243

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/4/2016 12:46:00 AM
I am awed by this poem, The images you weave, A7 and congratulations :)
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Date: 12/2/2016 3:23:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Carrie, congratulations...
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Date: 10/1/2013 7:45:00 PM
lovely win Carrie............SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2013 7:57:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your "SAPPHIC STANZA" winning poem.. :) always~~ Linda
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Date: 9/27/2013 6:20:00 PM
lovely poem Carrie...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/5/2013 2:14:00 PM
Very beautiful imagery in this poem! I loved it! This is a very relaxing poem to read...I love the nighttime, I gaze at the moon and the stars whenever I get a chance!...You might enjoy my poem titled, "Mystic Moon"...Thank you for the kind comments. It really means a lot to me!
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Date: 9/3/2013 11:54:00 PM
WONDERFULLY done. SEcond line beginning word is the only one I thought did not start stressed.
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Date: 9/4/2013 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Andrea......you are right.....I've changed that word......appreciate your keen eye and help !!
Date: 9/3/2013 7:35:00 PM
Stunning scene Carrie ....a sure winner I'd say.....
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Date: 9/3/2013 10:28:00 AM
Spectacular. You took this form and ran with it into the wild of night. Gorgeously done!
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Date: 9/2/2013 10:11:00 AM
Most excellent [its hard to get anything poetic out in this stumbling pattern! BUt you did it] Thanks for stopping by and reading my verses! Light & Love
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Date: 8/31/2013 4:13:00 PM
Dreamy images Carrie. This is just the image I would go for in composing a nature poem. Loved it and I love all that you have to share.
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:11:00 AM
enjoyed the write. Soup mail....
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Date: 8/31/2013 5:44:00 AM
The images you have painted in this, are just incredible. So....beautiful. Lainie
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Date: 8/30/2013 11:58:00 PM
Loved it Carrie...Seren
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