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Night Wings

Darkness gathers in a raucous cloud of wings to swell in trees, a seething mass of movement like a maggot ball hung high in a canopy until all subsides into a folded quiet. Air then becomes the domain of the silent whose wings beat in whispers and are cloaked in stealth. My mind paints a picture of an owl swooping low with talons drawn to hook an unwary mouse. Raptors are no threat to me. I fear those other wings let loose by man that my eyes cannot see, but slice the air on the edge of hearing, can fly clean through the center of thought and decapitate a feeling. These wings kill or leave wounds that weep and never heal.

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Date: 5/30/2023 9:21:00 AM
Every time I read this, Paul, U2's song "Bullet the Blue Sky" comes to mind. Added to my list of Favs.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/30/2023 5:08:00 PM
Many thanks Mark. Will make a point to listen to the U2 track. Appreciate your comments and giving the poem your time. Regards, Paul
Date: 5/29/2023 11:50:00 AM
Paul, brilliantly penned, love the dark and mysterious imagery.
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Date: 5/30/2023 12:10:00 AM
Thankyou Tania for your comments. Pleased that you took something from the poem...the feedback is very much appreciated and valued. Regards, Paul
Date: 5/28/2023 11:30:00 AM
Just to join in, I got the image of nasty black winged angels. I love to take little adventures into your poems Paul - content that It's an experience that I come out of the other side of. Safely escorted by your grounded voice
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Date: 5/28/2023 6:18:00 PM
Thanks DD. Interesting to learn of how the words form various meanings. This is what matters in the end, how the poem unfolds in the readers mind. The things that initially inspired the poem undergo a transformation sometimes and become part of a bigger reality. Take care...
Date: 5/28/2023 8:59:00 AM
My first thought about a raucous cloud of wings will always be cawing ravens. I always associate them with Poe, and although he is one of my favorites, ravens are now. Then, my mind thought, not of an owl as you did, but of bats. Strange how the same words can lead readers to see things differently. Not of birds do you write... not entirely.
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Date: 5/28/2023 6:08:00 PM
Thankyou Lin for spending time in the poem. The wonder of poetry is that it is subject to multiple interpretations...all valid. The writer may have a specific meaning in mind but then something else takes over and the poem assumes on its own life. The original source imagery of starlings roosting and winged airborne weapons may be superfluous. Appreciate yr thoughtful words...
Date: 5/27/2023 6:38:00 AM
"Raptors are no threat to me."....and then it got REAL scary....a dramatic shit very well done
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Date: 5/28/2023 5:37:00 AM
Appreciate your comments John. Raptors are somewhat overshadowed unfortunately by high explosive warheads these days....

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