Night Train

night train— at the end of her back zip a safety pin -kash poet (kashinath karmakar) http://www.dailyhaiku.org/haiku/2014-december-20

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/19/2020 9:22:00 AM

Did it keep her safe?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2020 5:23:00 PM

Just thinking of you and others that left Soup and hoping you are doing ok during this trying time. Is India locking everyone down like over here and other places? Stay well, kash.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/24/2017 11:52:00 PM

:) I'm with Andrea on this one. Not what I expected, but leaves me wanting to know the FULL story. Thanks for your visit to my poem, dear.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2017 8:21:00 PM

Now THAT gets the mind thinking!!! Love it, Kashinath. Give us MORE!!!