Night Song

Deep erupt tracheal cry;
Gypsy shrill into the sky,
Passion soars, raking air,
Igniting like a solar flair.
Lunging tones as pleas profound,
Accelerate away from ground.
Deeper zeal that pulses forth,
With pain as waves of emotions court,
Beseeching shaft as fast as light, 
Ripping shreds of cosmic night. 
Humankind has made its mark,
And roared its presence in the dark!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fringe Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 7:50 PM
Good write as always. David
Omaidin Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Excellent descriptions. Great stuff Regards: Déirdre
Chebukina Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 7:41 PM
Very true. Your poetry is amazing. You put a lot of feeling into it.And thank you fir you nice comment on my poem.
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January 24, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Lovely poem, enjoyed
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 8:46 AM
This has some great images in it, DAvid. I love these lines here: Ripping shreds of cosmic night. Humankind has made its mark, And roared its presence in the dark! What an excellent description!
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January 24, 2010 at 7:57 AM
Luv your flowing words one into another line after line... humankind makes its mark each day and roars either towards the light or dark... our choices... great write David and thankxxx so very much for your nice comments on my poetry reads too... posted some new ones on this Sunday too.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 9:24 AM
Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry today David. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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January 20, 2010 at 10:30 PM
Oooh ! - so many thoughts about this one, really well written, enjoyed it - Thanks
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