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Night Song

Deep erupt tracheal cry; Gypsy shrill into the sky, Passion soars, raking air, Igniting like a solar flair. Lunging tones as pleas profound, Accelerate away from ground. Deeper zeal that pulses forth, With pain as waves of emotions court, Beseeching shaft as fast as light, Ripping shreds of cosmic night. Humankind has made its mark, And roared its presence in the dark!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/9/2010 7:50:00 PM
Good write as always. David
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:03:00 PM
Excellent descriptions. Great stuff Regards: Déirdre
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Date: 1/25/2010 7:41:00 PM
Very true. Your poetry is amazing. You put a lot of feeling into it.And thank you fir you nice comment on my poem.
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Date: 1/24/2010 10:26:00 AM
Lovely poem, enjoyed
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Date: 1/24/2010 8:46:00 AM
This has some great images in it, DAvid. I love these lines here: Ripping shreds of cosmic night. Humankind has made its mark, And roared its presence in the dark! What an excellent description!
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Date: 1/24/2010 7:57:00 AM
Luv your flowing words one into another line after line... humankind makes its mark each day and roars either towards the light or dark... our choices... great write David and thankxxx so very much for your nice comments on my poetry reads too... posted some new ones on this Sunday too.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:24:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry today David. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2010 10:30:00 PM
Oooh ! - so many thoughts about this one, really well written, enjoyed it - Thanks
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