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Night Snack

Midnight, just right, Diet, Fry it! Watch back, sneak snack, Lights off, don't cough, Get chips, and dip, Food loud, crunch sound, Hear noise, lose poise, Heart pounds, chip mounds, Husband, sudden, Lights on, food gone, You cheat, dog eats, Roll eyes, he sighs. 3-21-17

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/1/2017 9:23:00 AM

Hi Cheryl, I enjoyed these humorous string of footles. Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/1/2017 9:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for very nice comment and visit Alexis!~Che :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2017 6:40:00 PM

A fabulous string of footles Cheryl I was looking for exact rhyme so the plurals on some lines and 'husband and sudden' 'pulled your poem down, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/31/2017 7:29:00 PM

Thanks so much for placing me as one of the winners; a very nice surprise Jan!~hugs Che xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/21/2017 9:30:00 PM

You're going to town with these footles, Cheryl! They are fun. Blessings, Kim

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/21/2017 9:46:00 PM

Thank you so much for kind comment and visit Kim! Blessings~Che :)