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Night Sky's Party

"The sky prepares the sun for night Where drifting clouds are slowly steeping In tepid pools of waning light" As the earth gets ready for sleeping The moon comes out from its hiding place Where drifting clouds are slowly steeping The sun says goodbye with setting grace And stars join the party of the sky The moon comes out from its hiding place The wind slowly dances feeling shy Murmuring whispers to the night shade And stars join the party of the sky Wondering why this passion must fade She delights herself with lamps glowing Murmuring whispers to the night shade All darkened time seems to be slowing The sky prepares the sun for night She delights herself with lamps glowing In tepid pools of waning light 05.15.2021 For Joseph May's "Choose your form 2" contest

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Date: 5/5/2022 10:30:00 AM
Let the party begin Jo! Thank you for the invitation to celebrate this poetic gem! Wonderful images and personification of the moon, sun, stars and wind. Love "the moon comes out from its hiding place," "wind slowly dances feeling shy." Such creative word pictures. Congratulations on your win! Blessings! Party on!!
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Date: 5/1/2022 12:42:00 PM
wow, so beautiful. Big congrats for your win, Jo.
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Date: 5/1/2022 12:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jo! Thank you so much for entering my contest. <3 ~Anna Kaianah
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Date: 6/6/2021 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful "Night Sky's Party" write. I love your line, "As the earth gets ready for sleeping." And it does. Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Date: 6/5/2021 3:22:00 AM
Very nicely penned Jo, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/15/2021 12:02:00 PM
Beautiful job, Jo. I congratulate you on a difficult task here. I think you succeeded where I failed most miserably! Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 5/15/2021 9:16:00 AM
So beautiful - graceful lines! Not easy to follow the form, but you have done it very well. To my faves. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 5/15/2021 7:10:00 AM
This is beautiful, Jo. Well done in this hard to execute form.
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Date: 5/15/2021 5:30:00 AM
A lovely Terzanelle. Like the villanelle I find them hard to compose. You did very well with the chosen stanza.
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Date: 5/15/2021 4:56:00 AM
Nicely done Jo. So easy and pretty to read. Hoping all is well with you and yours.
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