Night Silence

Twilight evokes my tranquility and silence of the night, with my peaceful guidance between the moon and the stars, the placid eclipse in the universe is so calm and bright, I play my melodies so gently on my acoustic guitar. With my peaceful guidance between the moon and the stars, there is a symphony shining through the constellations, I play my melodies so gently on my acoustic guitar, between sundown and nightfall there is a correlation. There is a symphony shining through the constellations, I feel a tune so vibrant with echoes of a midnight chorus, between sundown and nightfall there is a correlation, I see the paragon moon reflect equanimity before us. I feel a tune so vibrant with echoes of a midnight chorus, the stillness exclaims compassion for the world to see, I see the paragon moon reflect equanimity before us, Mother Nature has created nocturnal brilliance, so free. The stillness exclaims compassion for the world to see, for some the silence of nightfall seems so hard to find, Mother Nature has created nocturnal brilliance, so free, as the halcyon dusk sets, ready for the destiny of mankind. For some the silence of nightfall seems so hard to find, the placid eclipse in the universe is so calm and bright, as the halcyon dusk sets, ready for the destiny of mankind, twilight evokes my tranquility and silence of the night. The Love Of Nature Contest Date Written: June 14, 2016
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Radhakrishna Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 7:57 AM
This is so wonderful! The format is unique!! Great images! Congrats
La France Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 7:37 PM
Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem ~
Martin Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations Laura! Can almost hear the guitar playing! :-)
White Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 3:31 AM
Owwww, pantoums, how I love them! And yours is so wonderful luloo :) Congratulations...
Daniel Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 11:59 PM
Congratulations, Luloo:) a sweet and a peaceful pantoum:)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 1:28 PM
Congrats, Luloo! So beautiful!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 7:20 AM
Very serene pantoum, Laura. So peaceful and meditatively calm. A pleasure to read, it soothes the soul. A fantastic poem with such depth of consciousness. Very astral vibe. Love it though. Love and peace.
Dutta Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 9:29 AM
poem is simply excellent. Congrats Laura to win. Love
Scars Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 12:14 PM
thank you sweet Anisha :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Laura, back to congratulate you again on another fine win for your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 9:33 PM
thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:53 AM
So lovely to read this again LuLoo, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 4:35 PM
thanks again lovely Jan :)-luloo
Arnone Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:35 AM
A beautiful ode to the night. Love the line, "I play my melodies so gently on my acoustic guitar." Congrats! :-)
Scars Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 4:35 PM
thank you Tom :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 4:34 PM
thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo
Bankson Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 11:34 PM
Please sing or have someone turn this into a song>DaxsR and J
Scars Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 10:24 AM
awww thanks Jai you are sweet :)-luloo
Thirtyseven Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 1:41 AM
I see that this piece has won a contest. You've also made the most popular list. Double whammy. Well done, with this great poem.
Scars Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 10:23 AM
thank you Scott :)-luloo
Arnone Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Beautiful poem, Laura. It would have been nice to hear you strum some soft background chords while you recited the audio. Also, kept wanting it to say, between the moon and a star -- to rhyme with guitar.... ;-)
Scars Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 10:23 AM
thank you Tom very much :)-luloo
Buck Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 6:25 PM
Laura: Very well penned and read. I can't write like that but really enjoy those of you that can. Thank you for sharing with everyone on the Soup. oldbuck
Scars Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 7:55 PM
thank you Old Buck :)-luloo
Nehal Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Awesome Laura..Congrats for this honour
Scars Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 6:12 PM
thank you M :)-luloo
Scars Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 6:11 PM
Borgo Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 2:54 PM
Wow this poem is full of live and great expression, Louis.
Scars Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 6:11 PM
many thanks Louis :)-luloo
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 3:38 PM
You have a lovely voice for reading ypur poetry luloo. This form is difficult to pull off but you managed it brilliantly. Congratulations on your top win! 7 ; )
Scars Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 5:48 PM
many thanks Connie :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 7:13 AM
Love hearing your voice.
Scars Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 5:47 PM
thank you Andrea :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 7:13 AM
This is so lovely, Laura. Pantoum works brilliantly for it. Do you really play guitar? I took it up in my 40's and practiced so hard. But today I doubt I could remember all I learned. I hope you won well with this one. I see it was a winner and it well deserved it. Congratulations.
Scars Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 5:47 PM
thank you again Andrea :)-luloo
Daniel Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 1:08 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura:)
Scars Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 5:46 PM
many thanks Jo :)-luloo
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 3:31 AM
Congrats, my dear....Calm serenity. So much of this speaks to my heart...Tranquility is one of my favorite words. All things celestial speak to me. Dusk...another favorite time. Congrats, my dear. :) Hugs
Scars Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 12:01 PM
many thanks Eileen :)-luloo
Johnson Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 9:25 PM
This style lends itself to a reiteration of it's own essence. Your words flowed through it as ethereally as the subject matter did. Congrats on potd. They know a good thing when they see it. Peace. :)
Scars Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 12:00 PM
thank you very much Robert :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 8:24 PM
I'm taken by how easily you've made this form work, congratulations LuLoo...
Scars Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 11:59 AM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
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