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Night Silence

Twilight evokes my tranquility and silence of the night, with my peaceful guidance between the moon and the stars, the placid eclipse in the universe is so calm and bright, I play my melodies so gently on my acoustic guitar. With my peaceful guidance between the moon and the stars, there is a symphony shining through the constellations, I play my melodies so gently on my acoustic guitar, between sundown and nightfall there is a correlation. There is a symphony shining through the constellations, I feel a tune so vibrant with echoes of a midnight chorus, between sundown and nightfall there is a correlation, I see the paragon moon reflect equanimity before us. I feel a tune so vibrant with echoes of a midnight chorus, the stillness exclaims compassion for the world to see, I see the paragon moon reflect equanimity before us, Mother Nature has created nocturnal brilliance, so free. The stillness exclaims compassion for the world to see, for some the silence of nightfall seems so hard to find, Mother Nature has created nocturnal brilliance, so free, as the halcyon dusk sets, ready for the destiny of mankind. For some the silence of nightfall seems so hard to find, the placid eclipse in the universe is so calm and bright, as the halcyon dusk sets, ready for the destiny of mankind, twilight evokes my tranquility and silence of the night. The Love Of Nature Contest Date Written: June 14, 2016

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Date: 3/17/2020 7:57:00 AM
This is so wonderful! The format is unique!! Great images! Congrats
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Date: 2/11/2017 7:37:00 PM
Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem ~
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Date: 2/11/2017 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations Laura! Can almost hear the guitar playing! :-)
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Date: 2/11/2017 3:31:00 AM
Owwww, pantoums, how I love them! And yours is so wonderful luloo :) Congratulations...
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Date: 2/8/2017 11:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Luloo:) a sweet and a peaceful pantoum:)
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Date: 2/8/2017 1:28:00 PM
Congrats, Luloo! So beautiful!
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Date: 11/26/2016 7:20:00 AM
Very serene pantoum, Laura. So peaceful and meditatively calm. A pleasure to read, it soothes the soul. A fantastic poem with such depth of consciousness. Very astral vibe. Love it though. Love and peace.
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Date: 8/12/2016 9:29:00 AM
poem is simply excellent. Congrats Laura to win. Love
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/12/2016 12:14:00 PM
thank you sweet Anisha :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2016 6:52:00 PM
Laura, back to congratulate you again on another fine win for your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/10/2016 9:33:00 PM
thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2016 11:53:00 AM
So lovely to read this again LuLoo, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/10/2016 4:35:00 PM
thanks again lovely Jan :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2016 11:35:00 AM
A beautiful ode to the night. Love the line, "I play my melodies so gently on my acoustic guitar." Congrats! :-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/10/2016 4:35:00 PM
thank you Tom :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2016 11:30:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/10/2016 4:34:00 PM
thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo
Date: 7/12/2016 11:34:00 PM
Please sing or have someone turn this into a song>DaxsR and J
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/13/2016 10:24:00 AM
awww thanks Jai you are sweet :)-luloo
Date: 7/11/2016 1:41:00 AM
I see that this piece has won a contest. You've also made the most popular list. Double whammy. Well done, with this great poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/13/2016 10:23:00 AM
thank you Scott :)-luloo
Date: 7/8/2016 8:10:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Laura. It would have been nice to hear you strum some soft background chords while you recited the audio. Also, kept wanting it to say, between the moon and a star -- to rhyme with guitar.... ;-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/13/2016 10:23:00 AM
thank you Tom very much :)-luloo
Date: 7/7/2016 6:25:00 PM
Laura: Very well penned and read. I can't write like that but really enjoy those of you that can. Thank you for sharing with everyone on the Soup. oldbuck
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Date: 7/7/2016 7:55:00 PM
thank you Old Buck :)-luloo
Date: 7/3/2016 4:33:00 PM
Awesome Laura..Congrats for this honour
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/3/2016 6:12:00 PM
thank you M :)-luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/3/2016 6:11:00 PM
Date: 7/3/2016 2:54:00 PM
Wow this poem is full of live and great expression, Louis.
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/3/2016 6:11:00 PM
many thanks Louis :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 3:38:00 PM
You have a lovely voice for reading ypur poetry luloo. This form is difficult to pull off but you managed it brilliantly. Congratulations on your top win! 7 ; )
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2016 5:48:00 PM
many thanks Connie :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 7:13:00 AM
This is so lovely, Laura. Pantoum works brilliantly for it. Do you really play guitar? I took it up in my 40's and practiced so hard. But today I doubt I could remember all I learned. I hope you won well with this one. I see it was a winner and it well deserved it. Congratulations.
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2016 5:47:00 PM
thank you again Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 7:13:00 AM
Love hearing your voice.
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2016 5:47:00 PM
thank you Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 6/17/2016 1:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2016 5:46:00 PM
many thanks Jo :)-luloo
Date: 6/15/2016 3:31:00 AM
Congrats, my dear....Calm serenity. So much of this speaks to my heart...Tranquility is one of my favorite words. All things celestial speak to me. Dusk...another favorite time. Congrats, my dear. :) Hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/15/2016 12:01:00 PM
many thanks Eileen :)-luloo
Date: 6/14/2016 9:25:00 PM
This style lends itself to a reiteration of it's own essence. Your words flowed through it as ethereally as the subject matter did. Congrats on potd. They know a good thing when they see it. Peace. :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/15/2016 12:00:00 PM
thank you very much Robert :)-luloo
Date: 6/14/2016 8:24:00 PM
I'm taken by how easily you've made this form work, congratulations LuLoo...
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/15/2016 11:59:00 AM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
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