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Night Shoes

“Seen My red heels, Granny? Gotta leave soon. Parties are waiting!” “Under your bed, Honey. On your way out, please bring me my blue house shoes from my closet. Night shoes change with age. Have fun, my dear.”
May 14, 2019, entered in Anthony Slausin's Night Shoes Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/26/2019 3:19:00 PM
I remember this simple one that was also so adorable. Congrats. We both make the winner list and I'm so happy!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/26/2019 4:25:00 PM
Me too! Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Date: 5/25/2019 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem, love the last line!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/25/2019 9:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tania. Janice
Date: 5/25/2019 7:40:00 PM
I love this, Janice! Very clever, indeed, and so full of truth to be sure! Great contrast. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra Z:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/25/2019 9:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra. Janice
Date: 5/25/2019 5:53:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/25/2019 7:38:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 5/20/2019 3:07:00 PM
very clever message in your nonet. Great job!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/20/2019 3:15:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 5/14/2019 8:17:00 AM
Intergenerational sweetness, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/14/2019 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, Line. Janice
Date: 5/14/2019 7:13:00 AM
Party shoes under the bed, night shoes in the closet..cleverly done, Janice. All the best.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/14/2019 8:39:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice

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