Night of Terror

On a lonely dark night, I was awakened from 
my sleep.
My house was really quiet and you couldn't 
hear a peep.

I heard a mysterious noise coming from the
attic.
My husband was on a business trip, I was
about to panic.

I quietly got out of the bed, grabbed a flashlight 
and a bat,
I tiptoed nervously up the stairs; slowly opened
the door and saw a rat.

I thought he was the culprit, but I turned 
around and saw a hideous creature.
Fear overtook my whole being, darkness
concealed his every feature.

Then all of a sudden, he moved swiftly, and I 
felt a piercing in my chest,
Was it curtains for me, and was I about to die
from an unwanted guest?

In the far distance, I heard, "honey wake up."
rise and shine, buttercup!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Proxenos Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 10:06 PM
Such an entertaining story you poetically crafted - but I do like the ending, i got a fright as you saw the hideous creature, but all's well that ends well. Wonderful poem dear friend Alexis. Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
Leffanta Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Enjoyed!
Edmonds  Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Very scary Alexis, but a fantastic ending… Belle
Buhagiar Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 1:42 AM
We do have these nightmares occasionally. Well written.
Rose  Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 6:21 PM
Ah, so glad it was a dream, it must have got your heart pumping, Nicely written Alexis
Hawkins Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 5:26 PM
What a relief... I hope you do not have any more nights like that one, Alexis. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you.
Poet Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 3:11 PM
Alexis, Your story captivated me from start to finish and was well penned. What a relief to wake up from a nightmare! I hope you get a good night's sleep!
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 3:08 PM
gosh so glad it was only a dream thanks for the spooky storyline:-) hugs Jan xx
Romios Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Alexis, fabulous story in rhyme form Gojng and into my Favs, bravo on this one! PNgie
Y. Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Hi Pangie, Thank you so much for such a comment, and the fav. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:11 PM
I like the turn in the ending, Alexis. Your story kept my attention from start to finish. Cleverly done.
Kauffman Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Delightful "buttercup!" You really had me going with your well told spinning of this yarn! Scary and whimsical all at the same time Alexis. So glad this was only a dream! Blessings of sweet dreams to you!
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