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Night Light Walk

in the light we stand bright tonight as you look above in the blue night sky follow the moon with your eyes u will be suprised were this mystery will take you . around a million bright stars around the hollow moon and back will light up your mind to be opened as you notice the beautiful sky tonight . maybe you will hear a owl or crickets siinging shhh just go alone on your adventure in the dark dont be scared follow the moons bright light you will end up somewere wonderful maybe tommorw tell someone about how your wonderful adventure went encourage someone to walk outside to see gods beautiful moonlight that will always shine so bright . so walk and tell someone about it in the daylight. you wont need a flashlight. this time

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Date: 5/28/2017 11:42:00 PM
You are improving right before my eyes, Ashley! Still a few minor spelling mistakes, but overall a lovely job!
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 9/29/2017 11:32:00 AM
god bless white wolf thnk you for the comment
Date: 5/27/2017 6:27:00 AM
We will follow you wherever you may go. Great song.
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Date: 5/20/2017 12:09:00 PM
as a country boy....i must say i enjoy....everything natural....and that has proven factual....i owe the stars my apology....i know nothing of astrology....but i still feel that it's my duty....to tell you all about this Beauty....that was given to us by God....a truly flawless work of art....Beautiful work ashley....;)
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 9/29/2017 11:32:00 AM
thank you
Date: 5/20/2017 11:16:00 AM
It was a good poem, you ve written it beautifully however I m new on this site and receltly added my poems and I wojld be delighted if you could find the time to read them and g8ve your honest reviews about them
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Date: 5/20/2017 11:15:00 AM
:) awsomeness
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Date: 5/19/2017 8:34:00 PM
:) how i do ?
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