Night Light Walk

in the light we stand bright
tonight as you look above in the blue 
night sky follow the moon with your eyes 
u will be suprised were this mystery will take you .
around a million bright stars around the hollow moon and back 
will light up your mind to be opened as you notice the beautiful 
sky tonight .
maybe you will hear 
a owl 
or crickets 
siinging shhh
just go alone on your adventure in the dark 
dont be scared follow the moons bright light 
you will end up somewere wonderful maybe
tommorw tell someone about how your wonderful adventure went
encourage someone to walk outside 
to see gods beautiful moonlight 
that will always shine so bright .
so walk and tell someone about it in the daylight.
you wont need a flashlight.
this time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 11:42 PM
You are improving right before my eyes, Ashley! Still a few minor spelling mistakes, but overall a lovely job!
Rainwater Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 11:32 AM
god bless white wolf thnk you for the comment
Horn Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 6:27 AM
We will follow you wherever you may go. Great song.
Boddie Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 12:09 PM
as a country boy....i must say i enjoy....everything natural....and that has proven factual....i owe the stars my apology....i know nothing of astrology....but i still feel that it's my duty....to tell you all about this Beauty....that was given to us by God....a truly flawless work of art....Beautiful work ashley....;)
Rainwater Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 11:32 AM
thank you
Ajmal Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 11:16 AM
It was a good poem, you ve written it beautifully however I m new on this site and receltly added my poems and I wojld be delighted if you could find the time to read them and g8ve your honest reviews about them
Rainwater Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 11:15 AM
:) awsomeness
Rainwater Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 8:34 PM
:) how i do ?
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