Night Haiku

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Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 7:57:00 PM

me and my haiku. i love them.. irma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2010 2:15:00 PM

A most interesting little haiku or perhaps even a senryu! I enjoy this one!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2010 12:56:00 PM

Got a chuckle..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..What a delight to have you stop by, read, and comment on my work..Sara

Marcus Crane

Date: 12/28/2010 12:43:00 PM

great imagery my friend i love this one ..not the 5/7/5 syllable count ..but great haiku no doubt :) keep up the good work fellow poet

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/28/2010 10:30:00 AM

I really enjoyed this one, Jimbo :) I think mine went to sleep for the rest of the year ;) thank you for dropping by my blog-- happy that pine trees and palm trees are cool for you :) hope you have a wonderful 2011 :) -- nikko :)

James Peranteau

Date: 12/28/2010 7:13:00 AM

TY for sharing this remarkable poem Mr. Goff ! The title just radiates its thought ! Have a wonderful New year dear poet ! much love, james

Crystal Wilkins

Date: 12/28/2010 6:35:00 AM

interesting imagery... i love! :) Have a good new year and thank you for your comment on floating Crystal ~X~

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/27/2010 7:13:00 PM

This is so cool..not the traditional syllable count,..but I just love the barking moon. BG

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/27/2010 9:57:00 AM

one word, james.. RAWWR!!! :) nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/27/2010 2:40:00 AM

Stunning haiku, love the image James ;-)