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Night Dreams

The forest music plays
A haunting tune,
Vibrating softly
All around the countryside.
The fragrance of the spruce
Exuding joy,
Combine with the scent
Of the mighty magnolia
Now in full bloom.

Darkness falls.
We trudge a path
Towards a lake.
The peach-hued moon shines brightly.
Peace reigns.
We shelter in a hostel.
Besides a window.
The glitter of the moon
Shines across the placid waters.
All is calm.
A room is available.
What better way to spend the night?

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I Am Anaya

Date: 12/1/2022 1:41:00 PM

There is no better way, then the romance of the unknown, together! Love is grand, Victor, stay in it!

Deb M

Date: 12/1/2022 5:23:00 AM

Lovely poem Victor…..hope you are ok? Debx

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/30/2022 12:59:00 PM

The scenes played out before my mind as I read this poem Victor, wonderfully written and very descriptive!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/30/2022 2:59:00 AM

Splendid, Victor. Is there a room available...I'll take it!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/30/2022 1:38:00 AM

Great imagery shines in this picture-perfect poem, Victor:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/29/2022 10:13:00 PM

You say it as it is, Victor, and so lovely the poetry is too...Thanks. Harry

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/29/2022 8:59:00 PM

I don't know of any Victor it sounds like the prelude to one perfect night :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2022 7:35:00 PM

Wonderful write Victor

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2022 2:26:00 PM

Ahhh!! Sweet dreams, baby. I enjoyed this one because it reminded me of a song from long ago. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2022 1:06:00 PM

ahhh, sweet dreams. Love that peach color for the moon.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/29/2022 12:18:00 PM

The romantic scenes blend perfectly with the magical beauty of the night, in this enchanting poem! I love the combination of spruce and magnolia scents. This is a fave. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/29/2022 10:32:00 AM

A great place to spend the night! Love the peach-hued moon!

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/29/2022 8:57:00 AM

What a lovely setting. The ideal location for an intimate rendezvous.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 11/29/2022 8:43:00 AM

Victor, such an exhilarating view, energizing all senses! Worth checking into a hostel for, then later, two glasses of wine on the table?...ab

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/29/2022 8:23:00 AM

Wow! Such elegance~ poetic beauty. I see deep spirituality also expressed in this work, how we come to our beloved's peace. Wonderful poetry! Blessings. Oh!~ a Fav!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/29/2022 7:07:00 AM

Victor, the spiritual nomad! Enjoyed this soothing write

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/29/2022 7:06:00 AM

You paint a very tranquil scene Victor, the perfect setting for a romantic meeting. Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/29/2022 6:01:00 AM

You paint the scene perfectly in your signature style with exquisite details, Victor. Excellent, as always.

Valsa George

Date: 11/29/2022 5:29:00 AM

What heavenly ambiance you always create dear Victor ! I long to be there, not to wreck your privacy, but simply to roam freely around that placid lake on that moonlit night!