Night Burns

When night burns starless like a tomb,
shadow exults the dark and gloom.
Our souls hone fears sharp as a blade,
and every path holds certain doom.

To dare a trek on nights thus made
all rue in heart their fool's crusade.
Through shadowed vestige, mute and still
all dreams of past and future fade.

Fainthearted now, we lack the will
to slow our heart, to mount the hill,
where specters sing their doleful tune,
and dread alone makes one's blood chill.

Dark, boundless night would have us swoon,
so pray that safety comes, and soon.
When souls feel trapped by shadows dire
we cast our hopes upon the moon.

The moon sustains as twilight's fire,
it tarries until dusk expire.
When sunlight ends the night's deep mire,
we'll share new hope by dawn's bright pyre.

                                  ~~~Night Burns~~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 6:52 AM
A coffee sounds great but I was so hoping for a Corvette, oh well. Have a great day Brian.
Baumgarn Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 11:48 PM
We have several Corvette events in South Dakota each summer. People who are dedicated to the love of a beautiful automobile! There's nothing like a 'vette. I will get you one after I get a Harley, LOL. Have a great day.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Thanks for taking my suggestion. Have a great day.
Baumgarn Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 2:20 AM
That's embarrassing, really as these are all on file on my home and the work computer and all I have to do is transcribe correctly. That is what it was. You have saved my bacon about three times now. If we ever meet in person, I owe you a coffee.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 7:42 AM
Third stanza consider "dread alone makes one's blood chill" for some reason the word "along" causes my brain to snag in that spot spoiling the lovely rhythm of this excellent piece.
Baumgarn Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 1:25 AM
Yes, Richard, I am the guy you met at a dinner gathering that left his fly open and was the life of the party until he got home and realized he was advertising all night. Too bad I can't blame it on the keys. Glad you read for detail.
Baumgarn Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Richard, you have caught me in another spelling error. And, honest to God, when I started this reply I spelled your name Richared. There is no hope.................and thanks again, it should read alone!
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June 16, 2015 at 10:49 PM
This is simply excellent, Brian, and I'm afraid I'm going to have it as a fave, and print and frame it for my poem wall. And you're not getting it back. Ever. So there. a 7+ Regards, Viv
Baumgarn Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 3:41 AM
Thanks, Viv. I have a different perspective on nights now that I work overnights in a group home. I have worked graveyard shift about ten years at different times but now I think I know better where our childhood fears and such come from. Thanks again, for reading, my friend. I will be in touch.
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