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Night Blues

Here I am in the dead of night It is such a dead I smell the jasmines From its corpse taking flight And I am awake and strung with feelings Pounding in my brain to write While I stare blankly at the page Some buried thing yearning for light Some thing an anthema to rage I am awake, it has awaken me Beast, love, or suffering history? I scan memory with a laser point Where flowers bloom but never seed Nothing but weeds clogging the joint I need a flood for things to proceed. A man was born a seed to eternity And promises must worth more than this Out of potential comes possibility And without presence what can exist This night is the margin of another day Perhaps I'll cross it if I pray. Here I am in the dead of night Searching for memories reaching for flight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/11/2010 1:32:00 PM
marvelous, yes one must keep pen by bedstand!!! OH and paper (tough to write on kleenex!) Fav lines "Where flowers bloom but never seed/Nothing but weeds clogging the joint/I need a flood for things to proceed." It made me think of the boatman Charon who took man across the river Styx! Light & Love
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Date: 4/6/2009 5:06:00 PM
Ahhh the in betweens, so frightening! "It is such a dead I smell"..better.."It is death I smell..or Is it death I smell of jasmines corpse takes flight?"..do not use "thing" twice, how about "Some rage an anthema a blight." "I scan memory with a laser point Where flowers bloom but never seed, Nothing but weeds clogging the joint, I need a flood for things to proceed." excellent!!!Next line use different word for seed..vessel? Enough of me!! Light & Love
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Date: 3/13/2009 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.GB Tyesha
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Date: 3/11/2009 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week David. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2009 10:32:00 AM
Conggratulations David, on the featuring of your poem, "Night Blues." Vince
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Date: 3/9/2009 4:09:00 PM
Awesome write here, David. There's always that time in the middle of the night where the Great Mystery seems more burdensome than ever and then, in the light of day, it all gets clear again ... smile ... Very well-deserved choice to be a favorite this week here at the Soup! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:29:00 PM
Congrats...I learned I was featured today and many poets wrote me to congraululate me...I thought it was so sweet..so I am doing it too. Liked your poem, great visuals and smells...The cats comment
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Date: 3/9/2009 11:01:00 AM
David - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/8/2009 9:58:00 PM
David - well written poetry - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/7/2009 2:44:00 PM
Very good poetic technique: rhyme, imagery and metaphors and allusions
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