Night Blues

Here I am in the dead of night
It is such a dead I smell the jasmines
From its corpse taking flight
And I am awake and strung with feelings
Pounding in my brain to write
While I stare blankly at the page
Some buried thing yearning for light
Some thing an anthema to rage
I am awake, it has awaken me
Beast, love, or suffering history?

I scan memory with a laser point
Where flowers bloom but never seed
Nothing but weeds clogging the joint
I need a flood for things to proceed.
A man was born a seed to eternity
And promises must worth more than this
Out of potential comes possibility
And without presence what can exist
This night is the margin of another day
Perhaps I'll cross it if I pray.

Here I am in the dead of night
Searching for memories reaching for flight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 1:32 PM
marvelous, yes one must keep pen by bedstand!!! OH and paper (tough to write on kleenex!) Fav lines "Where flowers bloom but never seed/Nothing but weeds clogging the joint/I need a flood for things to proceed." It made me think of the boatman Charon who took man across the river Styx! Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 5:06 PM
Ahhh the in betweens, so frightening! "It is such a dead I smell"..better.."It is death I smell..or Is it death I smell of jasmines corpse takes flight?"..do not use "thing" twice, how about "Some rage an anthema a blight." "I scan memory with a laser point Where flowers bloom but never seed, Nothing but weeds clogging the joint, I need a flood for things to proceed." excellent!!!Next line use different word for seed..vessel? Enough of me!! Light & Love
Ehigiator Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 12:20 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.GB Tyesha
Brown Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 2:51 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week David. Love, Carol
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March 11, 2009 at 10:32 AM
Conggratulations David, on the featuring of your poem, "Night Blues." Vince
Mason Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 4:09 PM
Awesome write here, David. There's always that time in the middle of the night where the Great Mystery seems more burdensome than ever and then, in the light of day, it all gets clear again ... smile ... Very well-deserved choice to be a favorite this week here at the Soup! Congratulations!
Reinke Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 1:29 PM
Congrats...I learned I was featured today and many poets wrote me to congraululate me...I thought it was so sweet..so I am doing it too. Liked your poem, great visuals and smells...The cats comment
Heck Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 11:01 AM
David - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
Winter Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 9:58 PM
David - well written poetry - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Shango Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 2:44 PM
Very good poetic technique: rhyme, imagery and metaphors and allusions
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