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Night of Silence

Night of silence, night of forgetting, write me with your soft and dark pencil lines of lost songs and lines of love. Someone sings from blue rocks high above, mist of a morning first silent, now filled with dreams. Waves of sadness over the bottom of a sea of songs, abandoned and yellow, I feel your heart beating. A heart of a sad morning, full of desires, love and also loneliness. You, my voyager from a distance, you bring me the starry nights with your sober and colourful heart. It is you, who engraves in me desire with the power of a volcano from a far away horizon. Slowly, slowly, I do not want to leave you scared with my dreams. Slowly, slowly, my love, find slowly to the future, find confidence in this night of silence and of splendor and of love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/29/2009 9:20:00 PM
This somehow made me think of a lonely boat in the middle of the ocean @.@ really like your poetry, doesn't seem forced at all, pure fluidness. Thanksa lot for the experience =) and for the comment jojojo indeed I guess I will be posting more poetry in my mother language; meanwhile, I do have some poems in Spanish around here for you to read if you want to; there´s one called "(i)", "Desayuno" is also here, "K" and "Parámetros del sonido" are posted here to =) muchas gracias hermano =)
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Date: 10/3/2009 11:03:00 AM
A beautiful, memorable write, Gert. When a loved one fills the void created by loneliness, it's a feeling you never "want to leave." There is so much truth in this poem filled is wonderful images and strong emotion. Very universal in appeal! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/3/2009 9:19:00 AM
Good morning my German friend, Wow! This is such a romantic passionate poem. Each line full of amazing sentiments. I love these poems that are written from the heart. Keep writing and I'll keep reading your amazing poetry. Many blessings to you. Take care up there in your neck of the woods. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/2/2009 11:40:00 PM
wistful, dreamy, very nice! Gert!... jim
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Date: 10/2/2009 5:11:00 PM
Love the passionate write. Keep writing. Sara
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