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Night Fears

NIGHT      FEARS


When distant  daylight’s been  spent and spilled,
My lamp alone lights the curtained darkness
Of unseen fear,   which has always filled
The weary black pit yawning endless


Into the night;  and all the unknown
Terrors of the dreamworld
Conspire to extinguish my lamp lone
When the smothering  curtain is unfurled.


Oh,  how the dawn moves on leaden feet
To reach far into the shaded recess.
Oh,  let it make haste to meet
My  darkness with mothering succor and nearness.


       Awaiting the fear - it's deep  behind the lampless curtain. 
       Wanting the dawn - it creeps  slow and uncertain.    

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Entered in   Debbie  Guzzi ‘s  Contest    “ Fear “

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/14/2012 8:45:00 PM
Man I love your sonnets where's my new sonnet..nag nag nag...I need a Spensarian Sonnet..almost all the easy peasy English Variety so far..Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2012 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Debbie Guzzi's "Fear" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/12/2012 6:41:00 PM
Sidney, great job. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/12/2012 1:54:00 AM
SIDNEY , congratulations... with your wonderful win In Debbie's contest.. enjoyed your poem. have yourself a wonderful valentines~ always* xox~PD
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Date: 2/11/2012 8:50:00 AM
well crafted . congrats
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Date: 2/11/2012 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations Please forgive the cut and paste congratuations I must do today it does not diminsh the feeling behind the congratulations or the quality of the work presented. mum not well need to go out xx
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Date: 2/11/2012 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations Please forgive the cut and paste congratuations I must do today it does not diminsh the feeling behind the congratulations or the quality of the work presented. mum not well need to go out xx
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Date: 2/10/2012 10:07:00 PM
right uo theer with the stars, sid.. high fives for this! :) huggs!
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Date: 2/10/2012 10:01:00 PM
Congrats on your great win! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/10/2012 6:16:00 PM
Just a wonderful modern sonnet! The staccato language was just right! and the onomonepeia & alliteration stunning..please do keep up your great writing, I miss talking to you 2 Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/10/2012 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations on a great write and a great placement in the contest. Jon
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