Night

the moon rises her candle-lit glow dances casting shadows on walls as she weaves in and out of night's winded breath fingering every inch of darkness as she thrusts herself forward night moans in a climax of screams then becomes silent under freshly fallen dew she tucks herself beneath covers and awaits morning's blush

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Litan Dey

Date: 11/10/2013 6:45:00 AM

Covers and night...so well comparison .The story inside the story is expressive work by you.Loved it..

Jake Ponce

Date: 10/13/2013 8:58:00 PM

I could see Love in its purest form unfolding in the dimness. :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2013 7:15:00 PM

thank you Jake :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/6/2013 7:17:00 PM

This is very sexy! Love it!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2013 6:33:00 AM

thank you so much Richard...not sure where this one came from or where my muse was going with it... hugs :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/6/2013 1:44:00 PM

well written Sandra....best wishes

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2013 6:33:00 AM

Thank you Joseph...hugs :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2013 7:27:00 AM

Very expressive and creative work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading your unique creation today..Your visit to my page was uplifting.Sara

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2013 6:34:00 AM

thank you Sara...this one came out of nowhere :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2013 1:16:00 AM

I had to come back and fave THIS one. Just hurry and put them all in a book for me!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2013 6:35:00 AM

thank you Andrea....a book is my next goal in life.... hugs :)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/6/2013 1:05:00 AM

This is extremely awesome my dear friend Sandra. Absolutely, you're also a great poet indeed. Kudos on this great work of yours my very dear friend and Libramate! Thank you so much for sharing & belated thanks for your nice comments on my poem. More importantly too is..Advance happy happy birthday as well! Wishing u all the best! Thanks for informing me & I've already included your name in the librans' b-day balloons. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2013 6:36:00 AM

thank you for your kind words Leonora and the visit to my poem ...hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2013 4:33:00 PM

OH MY GOSH, this is brilliant. You have to keep writing EVERY day, Sandy. I never know what you will come up with but i am sure to love it. soupmail. I did something SO STUPID

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2013 6:37:00 AM

Thank you dear friend...I wish my muse would feel like writing every day....your words are always so kind....hugs :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/5/2013 11:58:00 AM

Oh lordy, my heart is pounding, and may the morning never come!...Another gem from you as usual...

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2013 6:37:00 AM

Thank you Tim for your visit and kind comment :) hugs