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I love the night, wandering in wide tranquil countryside, in the dim light of the pinhead stars, with their intricate constellations, a nocturnal symphony that helps give directions to wayward hitch hikers that roam in off course pathways. I love the night, imbibing the perfumes of the ambrosial countryside. The newly cut hay, the wayside fragrant flowers, all covered with a fine dew spreading delicate exquisite odors in country meadows. I love the night. In the open vistas, where all daily cares just fade away, like wispy steam from a far off train. A piece of soft music can be heard behind thick hedges, but be aware, think not of the ugly resonance that go bump in the night. I love the night. The winking owls hoot in lament, grasshoppers sing in close-mouthed consent, soggy frogs give an occasional harsh croak, but birds sleep happily on lofty trees. Isn't it a wonderful place to be? Thank you God for providing me the night.

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Date: 5/9/2023 2:25:00 PM
This is beautiful Victor.
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Date: 5/3/2023 3:26:00 AM
Victor, a wonderful poem, love the night imagery in the last stanza.
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Date: 5/1/2023 7:55:00 PM
Yes, thank you God. Great verse with feeling and imagery.
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Date: 5/1/2023 9:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. Night has its own rewards and the country side can be a very quiet and tranquil place to be. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 5/1/2023 8:24:00 AM
Hi Victor. Good Afternoon. I very much liked the utilization and repetition of "I love the night). It was well executed for emphasis. You leave imagery of this wondrous moment and time that has a life of its own. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent and skill. Have a beautiful night. Love and Blessings now and always. (peace and smile)
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Date: 5/1/2023 2:35:00 AM
- In the silence of the night ... where I live now there is very little light pollution, that is, there is no excess light like we have in cities ... you can feel how the darkness wraps around you and just listen ... A beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 4/30/2023 11:22:00 PM
"I love the night. In the open vistas, where all daily cares just fade away, like wispy steam from a far off train." Beautiful comparison and a lovely poem on a nocturnal ramble. The poem is alive with the sound of crickets, night owls and grasshoppers
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Date: 4/30/2023 2:32:00 PM
"imbibing the perfumes of the ambrosial countryside " silky smooth. God gave us both night and day, like you I too am a night owl! Hoo Hoo
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Date: 4/30/2023 12:56:00 PM
I love the amazing imagery in your lines Victor especially soggy frogs. Thanks for sharing my friend. hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/30/2023 11:46:00 AM
Calm, serene and lovely, with a succession of very pleasing images and natural sounds. This is a fave for me. :)
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Date: 4/30/2023 11:05:00 AM
I can easily picture everything you wrote Victor. A wonderful poem. I often sit under the stars at night with our faithful dog. Its so peaceful and quiet. your poem made me feel that way in the middle of the day ! Thankx Victor, a very special poem Best wishes my friend.
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Date: 4/30/2023 6:17:00 AM
Very nicely penned Victor, best wishes
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Date: 4/30/2023 5:46:00 AM
Wonderful inspiration throughout, Victor. Enjoy the happy sound of your poem and splendid imagery.
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Date: 4/30/2023 5:14:00 AM
I too love the night it's a chance to relax and to fully charge for the following day ahead Hope your weekend is going well Victor. Tom
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Date: 4/30/2023 1:25:00 AM
Sweet night thoughts with some awesome imagery, Victor:)
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