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Nicole (A Tropical Depression)

The earth grew loose and fell away
The rain just poured, and poured today
The winds rose up and help her slay
The vanities men adored of clay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/3/2010 3:19:00 AM
been watching the news and your storm over there .. well portrayed :) thanks again for your comment on my poem much appreciated love Jayne
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:07:00 AM
Earth, Rain, Wind ..... blending with men..... gud1....
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:56:00 PM
Well I can only imagine.Your words send me there.Beautiful.
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Date: 10/1/2010 12:51:00 PM
Yes David u have captured the storm in your lines so very well.. our area got hit pretty badly through the night and the rain and winds were fierce... this is a cool form u used also..I like it .. with luv..
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:29:00 AM
yes, this is awesome, David. And thanks for your comment on my blog. I really appreciate it. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 10/1/2010 10:28:00 AM
wow great poem :)
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Date: 10/1/2010 10:06:00 AM
This is great, really dig the imagery to go along with the deeper message. Now this I would love to see expanded into a larger sort of 'sing-song'~Chris
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