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NIBBLES

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Young Nibbles, a squirrel so grand, Preferred candy to nuts in his hand. He revoked the tiny oak, And of chocolate he only spoke. "These acorns," he'd scoff, "taste like sand!" He swapped nuts for gumdrops and lollies, Scaled gutters for sweet pocket jollies. His cheeks bulged like a flour sack, For hiding his stash, he had quite the knack. Chomped on the candy called creepy-crawlies. One day he found a candy store, And stuffed his fur 'til he could hold no more. But his teeth all developed decay, So he sadly swapped that day... For dentist-recommended celery galore!
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George Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 12:26 AM
After nibbling all the candies, Nibble lost his teeth. He must have then learned the bitter truth that too much of anything is not good.... ! :) :) Really enjoyed your limerick and the image of Nibble with his sack overflowing with candies.
Gauthier Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Charming storytelling ~ you must write children's books, Sara !!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 8:59 AM
thanks for the suggestion....never thought of it.
Crandall Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 7:29 PM
haha, that squirrel is aptly named. I would go for chocolate AND nuts, and maybe even celery, if I cut put peanut butter on it. Squirrels must have a pretty good life eating nuts and clowning around.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 8:59 AM
I'm with you with the peanut butter in celery....ah, to have a squirrel's life! :-)
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 7:13 PM
Cute, Sara! ~ Den(nis) Shurz
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 9:00 AM
thanks for that humorous and witting response.
Derden Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 1:30 PM
I feel for Sir Squirrel...celery YUCK!!!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 8:58 AM
I agree....celery yuck...the only thing that tastes worst brussel sprouts.
Hind Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 11:52 AM
HAHA :P
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 8:57 AM
thank you!
Ashley Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 8:58 AM
Dear Sara, lol! I adore this delightful, candy-eating squirrel. "He revoked the tiny oak,/And of chocolate he only spoke./"These acorns," he'd scoff, "taste like sand!".. haha! Poor Nibbles ended up at the dentist lol! He should have brushed after every gumdrop and lolly. Your golden pen brings the giggles! A wonderful lim, my sweet poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 8:57 AM
thanks, Susan, for your uplifiting and humorous comments. Glad you received some giggles from Nibbles. Wishing you a pleasant day, hugs, Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 5:02 AM
- Nibbles, learned his lesson... and you reminded me that I have to go to the dentist tomorrow :))) - A sweet poem, Sara :) - hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 8:56 AM
thanks for visiting....hope all went well at your dentist, Texas hugs, Sara
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