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Niagara Falls - 2011

The rumbling, crashing, riotous falls
were like instruments intent on
singing out their percussion.
Each watery movement came in
orchestrated rhythm, appearing as
the master of the scene
yet arriving on unheard cue.

The wild and noisy disorder of the
magnificent Niagara Falls were an
ever-changing mosaic of color
that could tumble from a
box of pastels.
In the sunlight they were soft,
no matter how bright the light became,
and always just as pleasing as the
gelato that sat in our waffle cones.

We dashed for cover as the sky
turned like a woolen gray shawl
upon the rolling hills behind us.
Colors arced into a bold sky,
stretching as open hands reaching
for the sun-kissed rain.
The colors were that bit more beautiful,
like God had polished the world afresh.

And how could we begrudge
those blessed drops?
For with them came
the rainbow, the greenery,
the cheery flowers, renewed vigor and
every other slice of life we so enjoy.

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Date: 3/10/2025 7:49:00 AM
Observations congealed into breathtaking words while capturing much of nature's actions with a sense of immediacy even though the poem reconnects with an experience that took place in the past, the descriptions are admirable and making me thirsty. Many images to enjoy and enlivening passages "that could tumble from a box of pastels" - my favorite.
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Date: 2/4/2025 3:32:00 PM
Hello Sharon Lambert, i love Nigra Falls. I like to listen to the falls rushing downward it is relaxing sound. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 2/4/2025 6:02:00 AM
I was waiting for the rainbow! I was born near the Falls or perhaps in a barrel going over NF…lol! Love the Maid of the Mist too..such a rush!
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Date: 10/21/2024 2:23:00 AM
Welcome Sharon been to the falls you captured it well with your words. I think eight or nine times. so much to take in have to go many times to feel the full effects of the falls... Lived in Rochester NY about an hour and twenty minutes from the falls...
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Sharron Read-Lambert
Date: 10/21/2024 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, Michael. We look forward to a return trip next year.
Date: 10/9/2024 6:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Sharron Read-Lambert
Date: 10/18/2024 12:19:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome, comment and Bible verse, Beata. I appreciate your input.

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