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Next Chapter

death a chapter
in ones life 
eternally grateful
our signature
in this life

to fullfil 
ones destiny
until we meet 
in eternity
the next chapter

to get there 
a life time
from now,
till the sands 
of times run out
so will time,

then
like a poet
we hope
to all come together
in eternity
to write 
the final
chapter



      i wrote this for my brother
      who drown whilst on holidays with his kids
       god rest him 
liam mc daid

Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2013

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Ralph Taylor Date: 9/29/2013 11:54:00 AM Excellent, Liam. Beautiful piece. Congrats. Ralph Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 9/28/2013 9:12:00 PM such a heartfelt touchingly beautiful poem, so glad it won...congrats and hugs :) Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/28/2013 2:12:00 PM liam, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Shanity Rain Date: 9/28/2013 11:41:00 AM Excellent write , and win !! Very deserved my friend , congratulations ! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/28/2013 5:15:00 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, liam Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/27/2013 7:45:00 PM liam, , Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA Login to Reply

Allan Koven Date: 9/19/2013 4:41:00 PM When a loss like yours occurs, it is hard to understand; so young. Your requiem was very touching. Sometimes poetry is the only way we can adequately express our feelings. You did well. Allan Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/20/2013 10:12:00 AM allan thank you ever so much wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Sandra Adams Date: 9/15/2013 6:54:00 PM so sorry to hear of your brother's passing...I too have lost a brother and understand the pain... this poem is a beautiful tribute to him! Nicely penned! Hugs :) Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/16/2013 12:41:00 PM GOD LOVE YOU THANK YOU DEEPLY SANDRA HEARTFELT APPRECIATED

Ken Carroll Date: 9/15/2013 5:13:00 PM Hey Liam, Nice tribute write for your brother..Enjoyed the poem but saddened to read of his passing. Ken Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/16/2013 12:13:00 PM KEN MY FRIEND I THANK YOU DEEPLY HEARTFELT APPRECIATED OLD PAL

Eileen Manassian Date: 9/15/2013 2:39:00 PM I'm so sorry for your and his family's loss. Life can be so so cruel, but yes...there is a better day coming and a better lie awaits us....Hold on.... Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/16/2013 12:01:00 PM THANK YOU SO KINDLY FOR TH AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIAED

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/15/2013 1:58:00 PM My heart goes out to you and my eyes are filled with tears as I read this heartwrenching poem.Im sure he s with you through soul cause the soul lives forever and there is no greater love than loving with soul... Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/16/2013 11:52:00 AM HI MY DEAR FRIEND HE IS ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS WE SHARED A HEART YOU ARE SO SWEET TOUCHED ME VERY DEEPLY I THANK YOU HUMBLED BY SUCH A BEAUTIFUL SOUL HEARTFELT APPRECIATED HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 9/15/2013 1:49:00 PM Touching write Liam. Much respect to you old pal. Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/16/2013 11:40:00 AM DEAR FRIEND THANK YOU EVER SO HEARTFELT APPRECIATED MY FRIEND

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/15/2013 12:16:00 PM this is a very personal, heartfelt write.. i feel with you , liam.... graciously scribed with tenderness and affection!..:) huggs Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/16/2013 11:35:00 AM AH THAT WAS VERY SWEET THANK YOU KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Tina Moore Date: 9/15/2013 11:39:00 AM a beautiful tribute and great piece to write. even through sadness let your pen carry on to soothe your soul tina x Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/16/2013 11:27:00 AM THANK YOU EVER SO KINDLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Shanity Rain Date: 9/15/2013 9:32:00 AM May he and you find peace , this is beautiful , I say you are captivating my very heart Liam . In all innocence. I am sure he rest softly , yet proud with angels , I am sure you know ..death is another realm .He is with you , Love always , Yvette Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/16/2013 10:06:00 AM CAPTIVATING SWEET BEAUTIFUL HEARTFELT COMMENT I THANK YOU DEEPLY GOD BLESS

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/15/2013 8:46:00 AM A heartfelt write liam. A tribute to your other half.. You are a wonderful poet, and I am glad you are in our chapters now. A blessing poem, always Linda Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/16/2013 9:35:00 AM THANK YOU DEARLY LINDA GOD BLESS BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Poet Tacito Date: 9/15/2013 8:14:00 AM My deepest condolences. I know this wasn't easy to write. Perhaps a bit of closure, but never do the feelings & memories fade. Respect to you for this writing. Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/16/2013 9:31:00 AM AH THANK YOU GOD BLESS THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED