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death a chapter in ones life eternally grateful our signature in this life to fullfil ones destiny until we meet in eternity the next chapter to get there a life time from now, till the sands of times run out so will time, then like a poet we hope to all come together in eternity to write the final chapter i wrote this for my brother who drown whilst on holidays with his kids god rest him liam mc daid

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/29/2013 11:54:00 AM

Excellent, Liam. Beautiful piece. Congrats. Ralph

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/28/2013 9:12:00 PM

such a heartfelt touchingly beautiful poem, so glad it won...congrats and hugs :)

Skat A

Date: 9/28/2013 2:12:00 PM

liam, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Shanity Rain

Date: 9/28/2013 11:41:00 AM

Excellent write , and win !! Very deserved my friend , congratulations !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/28/2013 5:15:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, liam

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2013 7:45:00 PM

liam, , Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA

Allan Koven

Date: 9/19/2013 4:41:00 PM

When a loss like yours occurs, it is hard to understand; so young. Your requiem was very touching. Sometimes poetry is the only way we can adequately express our feelings. You did well. Allan

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/20/2013 10:12:00 AM

allan thank you ever so much wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/15/2013 6:54:00 PM

so sorry to hear of your brother's passing...I too have lost a brother and understand the pain... this poem is a beautiful tribute to him! Nicely penned! Hugs :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 12:41:00 PM

GOD LOVE YOU THANK YOU DEEPLY SANDRA HEARTFELT APPRECIATED

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/15/2013 5:13:00 PM

Hey Liam, Nice tribute write for your brother..Enjoyed the poem but saddened to read of his passing. Ken

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 12:13:00 PM

KEN MY FRIEND I THANK YOU DEEPLY HEARTFELT APPRECIATED OLD PAL

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/15/2013 2:39:00 PM

I'm so sorry for your and his family's loss. Life can be so so cruel, but yes...there is a better day coming and a better lie awaits us....Hold on....

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 12:01:00 PM

THANK YOU SO KINDLY FOR TH AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIAED

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/15/2013 1:58:00 PM

My heart goes out to you and my eyes are filled with tears as I read this heartwrenching poem.Im sure he s with you through soul cause the soul lives forever and there is no greater love than loving with soul...

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 11:52:00 AM

HI MY DEAR FRIEND HE IS ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS WE SHARED A HEART YOU ARE SO SWEET TOUCHED ME VERY DEEPLY I THANK YOU HUMBLED BY SUCH A BEAUTIFUL SOUL HEARTFELT APPRECIATED HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/15/2013 1:49:00 PM

Touching write Liam. Much respect to you old pal.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 11:40:00 AM

DEAR FRIEND THANK YOU EVER SO HEARTFELT APPRECIATED MY FRIEND

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/15/2013 12:16:00 PM

this is a very personal, heartfelt write.. i feel with you , liam.... graciously scribed with tenderness and affection!..:) huggs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 11:35:00 AM

AH THAT WAS VERY SWEET THANK YOU KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Tina Moore

Date: 9/15/2013 11:39:00 AM

a beautiful tribute and great piece to write. even through sadness let your pen carry on to soothe your soul tina x

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 11:27:00 AM

THANK YOU EVER SO KINDLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Shanity Rain

Date: 9/15/2013 9:32:00 AM

May he and you find peace , this is beautiful , I say you are captivating my very heart Liam . In all innocence. I am sure he rest softly , yet proud with angels , I am sure you know ..death is another realm .He is with you , Love always , Yvette

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 10:06:00 AM

CAPTIVATING SWEET BEAUTIFUL HEARTFELT COMMENT I THANK YOU DEEPLY GOD BLESS

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2013 8:46:00 AM

A heartfelt write liam. A tribute to your other half.. You are a wonderful poet, and I am glad you are in our chapters now. A blessing poem, always Linda

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 9:35:00 AM

THANK YOU DEARLY LINDA GOD BLESS BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/15/2013 8:14:00 AM

My deepest condolences. I know this wasn't easy to write. Perhaps a bit of closure, but never do the feelings & memories fade. Respect to you for this writing.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/16/2013 9:31:00 AM

AH THANK YOU GOD BLESS THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED