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In honor of my first greatgrandson and my granddaughter

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/7/2021 5:29:00 PM

Congratulations! There is nothing as marvelous as a new baby in the family!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2021 7:01:00 AM

Ahh!! Congrats on such a happy time. We sort of have a great granddaughter but it is one of those step-great granddaughter situations though. She is precious and growing like a weed. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/6/2021 2:18:00 AM

A perfect haiku. The family grows and so does happiness. Hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/5/2021 9:46:00 PM

So poetic and so sweet. A glorious day indeed: A greatgrandson and granddaughter. Happy for your, Eve! ~ Gershon

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/5/2021 5:10:00 PM

Wonderful and wonderous. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/5/2021 11:05:00 AM

Hi Eve, You've such a lovely and meaningful haiku. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Mark Koplin

Date: 8/5/2021 10:27:00 AM

beautiful Eve!