New Year Resolutions

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Fragmented Rhyme: Form created by Constance La France ___________________________________________ Sleepless nights won't be squandered again My most labor shall shine; may blessings include I resolve to eradicate wickedness and strain Rather than hatred or anger, cultivate gratitude I am solely driven to view the positive side I envision my journey with delight and pride Relishing in every breath as all else may hide My New Year's resolution is a sign of the past year With prosperity, this is a year of promise and no fear Relish each instant of familial love with no tears I'll do my best to be blissful and free of pain I won't be disheartened; will retain a sweet mood With a fresh day, I'll turn flops into wins wide I started good but it did not last ... CHEERS !

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/31/2023 11:50:00 PM

Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. Joyous New year to you and your family. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/31/2023 1:08:00 PM

Back with Congratulations with your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "New Year Resolutions" write again. Happy New Year... Write More In 24...........................

Constance La France

Date: 12/31/2023 6:25:00 AM

Sotto, congratulations on your win in my Funny New Years Resolutions contest, your poem was serious and then was fun and I liked it a lot, Happy New Year, Constance

Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/11/2023 2:14:00 AM

What a bunch of splendid resolutions. Each one achievable and so very admirable. Just loved this dear friend. A Favorite for me.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 12/10/2023 2:14:00 PM

My dear friend. Put your beautiful voice on this poem, because It's so exquisite, that I think it would be a right dot on the "i". to listen to you. Taking my hat off again. This is lovely. Nice to read you after an stressing weekend for me. Blessingsxxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/10/2023 11:13:00 AM

Much hope and inspiration you convey my friend. Best of everything is ahead for you, Lasaad. Write on!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/10/2023 10:30:00 AM

I enjoyed your wonderful "New Year Resolutions" write/great ending/pretty flowers. Yes, delight/cheer... Good Luck. Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day...............

Ink Empress

Date: 12/10/2023 9:09:00 AM

Brilliant rhymes as always dr sotto, i hope many would also try to keep resolutions like this, to be better and do better and not spread negativity, forgive and be kind and never be disheartened, although ofcourse sometimes it is natural to get disheartened, we shall remind ourselves to always get back on stronger. A stoic perspective you have on life and i can see that through this write too. I love especially the flow of this and the sincerity of thoughts expressed. Well delivered, in eloquenc

Valsa George

Date: 12/10/2023 8:51:00 AM

You are ever positive with clear objectives of life before you and well chalked out plans. Hope your New Year will be one of greater creativity. Success comes to one who will perspire and persevere. You are ready for both. So you can expect a beautiful 2024. Wonderful resolutions for the New Year, dear Lasaad.