New Year Blues

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5th in Short Forms Contest (Sponsor: Brian Strand)

Judged: January 19th, 2025

New Year's
charms dim like a Cinderella midnight
deadline

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2025 11:41:00 PM

Way to go. Great win!

Trina Layne
Date: 1/20/2025 9:02:00 AM

Thanks so much and congrats to you as well. I started reading through some of the other short-form entries. Cool stuff!

Crystol Woods

Date: 1/19/2025 12:25:00 PM

"A Cinderella midnight" that's so inspired! Awesome! Xo

Trina Layne
Date: 1/20/2025 9:00:00 AM

Congratulations to you as well! I didn't realize that the results of the contest had been posted. Andrea tipped me off. Then I was like okay.

Trina Layne
Date: 1/19/2025 5:08:00 PM

Thank you, Crystol. Happy 2025 to you and yours!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/3/2025 12:27:00 PM

Like this metaphor!

Trina Layne
Date: 1/3/2025 5:13:00 PM

Your comment is noted and appreciated. Happy New Year!