New Year Monoku

> touching my face her ruby red lips at the stroke of midnight

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 11:01:00 AM

Delightful monoku. Congrats, Rick.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/29/2017 9:53:00 PM

Beautifully expressed romantic imagery Rick. Congratulations on your win.. Happy New Year ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2017 4:38:00 PM

This one is tops for me, Rick. (well, from what i am reading up to this point) I just love the romantic leaning in the theme. Congrats for your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2017 1:02:00 PM

- Congratulations, Rick :) - A great line for the new year - Happy New Year To You - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2017 6:55:00 AM

Great one liner, Congratulations on your placement in the new year contest and happy new year Rick...