New World Order

Now sat among the debris of the day
confused and helpless as a child at birth,
his senses pounding hard within his frame -
mixed messages of equilibrium.
All frames of reference cast into a jar,
commingle as a coalescent broth
into a jumble of perceptiveness,
now pushing to be free beyond his mind.
At last the signal snakes down to his lips
and snaps his jaw awake as breath is sought;
feeds hungry lungs which roar within his chest
and urge his flesh to swell against the press.
New vistas draw a whisper from his throat
a new word not yet spoken … Tsunami.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 9:41 AM
GREAT SONNET My personal taste in sonnets is composed and presented as three four verse stanza's with a closing couplet. Somehow I find the overall theme easier to understand that way. This is a very good sonnet my friend. A7
Lindsay Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 6:23 AM
written as a Sonnet - my first
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