New Shoes...."footles"

A treat For feet Oh no, My toe! Not right Tooo tight! Sigh……. Must wear Old pair….

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Kat Crane

Date: 5/4/2009 9:04:00 AM

So pretty, and yet so evil are the new shoes! Kat

James Fraser

Date: 5/2/2009 4:25:00 PM

Shoes can be so ouchy, and the old pair are fair comfort. James,xx

Brian Strand

Date: 5/2/2009 1:01:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comment today BG Have a good weekend Rgds Brian

Daver Austin

Date: 5/1/2009 12:39:00 PM

I don't know what 'footles' is, but I like your poem. short and direct and simple, that's my way. Love, daver

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/1/2009 10:09:00 AM

LOL! Oh so true of new shoes!

Brian Strand

Date: 5/1/2009 1:18:00 AM

Amusing words sequence BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/30/2009 7:53:00 PM

Marvelous, How clever to write footles about your feet. I love it. D S-J

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/30/2009 7:21:00 PM

Sooo funny, Barbara! How about walking a mile in my shoes (not too bad looking for corrective shoes)? My moccasins (all 15 pairs) were much more comfortable, but the new ones are doing what they're supposed to do. You have quite a flair for humor. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/30/2009 2:14:00 PM

How cute is this?? Yep...I've got new shoes I never wear....the older I get....the more important comfort becomes!! :)

Date: 4/30/2009 1:06:00 PM

Got a good chuckle out of this one. So creative. Thank you for sharing your gift of humor with us. I enjoyed it. Karen

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/30/2009 11:19:00 AM

Love this my friend..I could see this played out as I read..good work.