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New Shoes...."footles"

A treat
For feet

Oh no,
My toe!

Not right
Tooo tight!

                 Sigh…….

Must wear
Old pair….

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Kat Crane

May 4, 2009 at 9:04 AM

So pretty, and yet so evil are the new shoes! Kat

James Fraser

May 2, 2009 at 4:25 PM

Shoes can be so ouchy, and the old pair are fair comfort. James,xx

Brian Strand

May 2, 2009 at 1:01 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comment today BG Have a good weekend Rgds Brian

Daver Austin

May 1, 2009 at 12:39 PM

I don't know what 'footles' is, but I like your poem. short and direct and simple, that's my way. Love, daver

Corinne Curcio

May 1, 2009 at 10:09 AM

LOL! Oh so true of new shoes!

Brian Strand

May 1, 2009 at 1:18 AM

Amusing words sequence BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

April 30, 2009 at 7:53 PM

Marvelous, How clever to write footles about your feet. I love it. D S-J

Carolyn Devonshire

April 30, 2009 at 7:21 PM

Sooo funny, Barbara! How about walking a mile in my shoes (not too bad looking for corrective shoes)? My moccasins (all 15 pairs) were much more comfortable, but the new ones are doing what they're supposed to do. You have quite a flair for humor. Love, Carolyn