New Shoes...."footles"

A treat
For feet

Oh no,
My toe!

Not right
Tooo tight!

                 Sigh…….

Must wear
Old pair….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/4/2009 9:04:00 AM
So pretty, and yet so evil are the new shoes! Kat
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Date: 5/2/2009 4:25:00 PM
Shoes can be so ouchy, and the old pair are fair comfort. James,xx
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Date: 5/2/2009 1:01:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment today BG Have a good weekend Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/1/2009 12:39:00 PM
I don't know what 'footles' is, but I like your poem. short and direct and simple, that's my way. Love, daver
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Date: 5/1/2009 10:09:00 AM
LOL! Oh so true of new shoes!
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Date: 5/1/2009 1:18:00 AM
Amusing words sequence BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 4/30/2009 7:53:00 PM
Marvelous, How clever to write footles about your feet. I love it. D S-J
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Date: 4/30/2009 7:21:00 PM
Sooo funny, Barbara! How about walking a mile in my shoes (not too bad looking for corrective shoes)? My moccasins (all 15 pairs) were much more comfortable, but the new ones are doing what they're supposed to do. You have quite a flair for humor. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/30/2009 2:14:00 PM
How cute is this?? Yep...I've got new shoes I never wear....the older I get....the more important comfort becomes!! :)
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Date: 4/30/2009 1:06:00 PM
Got a good chuckle out of this one. So creative. Thank you for sharing your gift of humor with us. I enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 4/30/2009 11:19:00 AM
Love this my friend..I could see this played out as I read..good work.
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