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New Horizon

New horizon expands nature’s laws In this new visage there are no flaws The soul of vortex reflection of them will cause In new form they extend so far it is worthy of applause The spirit is a curious thing And like a beautiful bird it can sing Adorned by a awesome ring All elements bow down to only one king This is the lord of bliss Like a ballad that ancient stories will reminisce The essences of soul growth increasing is Until it reaches this timeless ultimate number in post celestial abyss Vaster then the deepest sea It can change very destiny It is full of splendor and majesty With echoes of omnipotence it fits magnificently

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Date: 9/19/2013 10:10:00 AM
You have a lot of great verses in this poem, and I especially loved the phrase "soul of vortex". Although I enjoyed this piece, I would suggest tightening up your rhymes a bit, to make them flow more effortlessly. With some polishing, I think you'll have a wonderful piece of work :)
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