Home » Poems » Paula Goldsmith » New Home - Hell

Paula Goldsmith | + Follow Poet |

New Home - Hell

death will come quickly express elevator down new home BBQ city Date Written:3/7/2023 "4 Place"

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/16/2023 12:08:00 PM

This is charming, Paula. Plenty don’t believe in hell. Pangie xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/19/2023 10:08:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun Hell write charming. True, many do not believe in Hell. Guess it will be an eye opener for them. Have a blessed/wonderful week............

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/12/2023 12:40:00 AM

No top dogs at that barbeque, just hot dogs!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2023 10:15:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun write. Just hot dogs here. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed/wonderful weekend..........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/11/2023 6:30:00 PM

'BBQ City' --- heh, heh. Good description. ~ A Little Devil

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2023 10:13:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun Hell~"BBQ City" write. It is one hot place. Have a blessed/wonderful weekend..........

Len Gasun

Date: 3/11/2023 12:29:00 AM

An outstanding haiku that speaks volume my dear friend Paula. A very creative modern name of hell, BBQ City. I'm sure, bbqs being served there have no seasonings at all and all will be overcooked. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/11/2023 6:05:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my fun write and new name for Hell~"BBQ City." It is one hot place and overcooked. Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful weekend..........

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/10/2023 5:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Paula! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/11/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad to see you. Have a blessed/wonderful weekend..........

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/10/2023 9:50:00 AM

Paula an excellent description and I love the rename "BBQ City" Your few words say so very much. Congratulations on your Win in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/10/2023 2:12:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my new fun Hell name "BBQ City." It is one hot place. Have a blessed/wonderful weekend..........

Margarita Lillico

Date: 3/10/2023 9:17:00 AM

Quirky and hot!:) Congrats!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/10/2023 2:10:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun Hell write. Have a blessed/wonderful weekend..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2023 6:18:00 AM

- ... welcome to hell ... woow ... great done, Paula - If it's for the "Hell contest" then I wish you luck ... - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/10/2023 2:08:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your luck. Yes, for the hell contest. Glad you like this Hell write. Hugs. Have a blessed/wonderful day...........

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2023 1:30:00 PM

So sad that is the destination of some evil people and some who think that they are saved. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Yes, so sad but so true. Have a blessed/wonderful day...........

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/7/2023 1:13:00 PM

Well-crafted haiku, Paula. You conveyed a great picture here.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 8:44:00 AM

Thanks for your note. I am glad you like my haiku write. We can paint a picture with our words. Glad you found my painted picture. Have a blessed/wonderful day...........

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/7/2023 8:43:00 AM

I kinda doubt there will be a whole lot of partying going on but I love that last line. Thanks for the smile, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 8:42:00 AM

Thanks for your note. I am glad you love my last line. Also glad it gave you a smile. I love to give out smiles. When the express elevator down, all the partying stops. No more fun. Have a blessed/wonderful day...........