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NEW FRIENDS- Nursery Rhyme

Little Jake wanted to build a spaceship, so he could make new friends on Mars. Kids here were mean; he planned a cool trip each night he made lots of wishes on stars. Children at school made fun of his stutter, he got really sad that he kept quiet. Until a new kid said, “Hi “ with a small utter, He stuttered too, and his name was Wyatt. Contest: Nursery Rhyme 4 Sponsor: Eve Roper 04/10/2021

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 6/9/2021 6:56:00 PM

So sweet. I was a pre-k and kindergarten teacher for years, so I had empathy for poor Jake. I loved your line, " Hi" with a small utter I can visualize what two children looked like as I read. So dear.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/17/2021 2:01:00 PM

This is sweet and has a good message! Congrats on your HM, Alexis! Blessings, Kim M

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/16/2021 3:58:00 PM

Alexis! Congratulations sweetie!! Well done you!! Big huggs and love. Deb

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2021 2:28:00 PM

- Back with a congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Belle Bellevue

Date: 4/16/2021 2:33:00 AM

Well done Alexis, knew this was a sure winner ~ Congratulations! ~ Belle

Eve Roper

Date: 4/15/2021 9:38:00 PM

I love your poem, Alexis, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.
Date: 4/15/2021 9:47:00 PM

Hi Eve, I enjoy your nursery rhyme contest. I appreciate my placement. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/12/2021 8:19:00 PM

We need more poetry that shows kids how to accept other kids who may be a bit different so they won't make fun of them at school. I love the internal message in your rhyme Alexis. It helps to teach. Wonderful! Blessings xxoo

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/11/2021 10:07:00 PM

Your poem has great appeal for little ones, Alexis. There is the exciting and interesting concept of building one's own spaceship for traveling, and also the story of the sad little boy, that had a happy ending. Best wishes for the contest. :=)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/11/2021 10:21:00 AM

What a cute poem Alexis. Best of the lot.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/10/2021 4:09:00 PM

Sweet Alexis. It's okay at school if they have at least one true friend. God Bless, JB

Belle Bellevue

Date: 4/10/2021 2:33:00 PM

A good nursery rhyme Alexis, a lesson for children to learn that a stutter can’t be helped, but being caring and respectful can make all the difference to someone who unfortunately does have a stutter. Best wishes for the contest... Belle

Alexis Y.
Date: 4/10/2021 4:09:00 PM

Hi Belle, Thank you so much. Now I'm waiting on you to write one. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2021 1:32:00 PM

this is so sweet. A good one for little kids to feel better about themselves.

Gordon McConnell

Date: 4/10/2021 1:13:00 PM

A nice little simple piece Alexis so well told indeed. Blessings, Gordon

Michael Ellis

Date: 4/10/2021 11:49:00 AM

I just love a quatrain with a happy ending. You gave us a valuable reminder of respect and we can never have enough of those poems..Though I confess I loved the first stanza an ounce more than the second.. Im so biases..Maybe it was the Mars thing

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/10/2021 10:27:00 AM

What a sweet story about how kids who need each other can kind each other - glad he didn't have to go to Mars to find his friend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2021 10:26:00 AM

- Is number 4 already arrived ... so much fun :) - Both sweet and touching written, Alexis :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JAN ALLISON

Date: 4/10/2021 7:59:00 AM

aww Alexis this is such a touching poem on so many levels, kids can be cruel and dont understand how hurtful they can be so glad the poem had such a happy ending:-) hugs Jan xx