New Dawns

Immerse they say
Yawn in dawns of bright new days
Pillow canyons 
blue blanket falls
Yarn gardens 
tangled 
listless 
tall

Above wicker birds 
endlessly high
is open firmament 
a cotton down sky.

A door slowly opens in the still mezzanine,
within soft ivory forests and spiny mesquite trees.
Fleeting brisk laughter from vanishing imps
is our welcoming overture and beckons us in.

From a dark chasm we slowly emerge
Through a symbol, a door marked cypher and verge.  
The door locked behind us, leaving us here
to wander in awe
for the rest of our years.

Written by my husband Thielus.
A. Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 20, 2010 at 6:05 PM
Sent you mail, Bill.
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March 20, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Again, A very talented man your hubby Thielus. Why hasn't he joined Poetry Soup with all of us. Best Wishes Always Amy, Bill (Soup Mail)
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