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Weekly weigh-in Feet hit the pavement Spaces-Imagism..per Brian Strand Thought I'd try it, hope I got it right.

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Date: 12/5/2008 5:00:00 PM
Dear Barbara, Great Write I do believe YOU GOT it right GOOD LUCK YOUR SOUP Friend... HG Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments On My Write-- HG Friends ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 12/5/2008 7:18:00 AM
Great spaces poem! I'm still stewing ideas around trying to write one of my own. The form is just fascinating. Thank you for your comments on my poem "Lament of the Philosopher's Hound"...yes, those wretched sighs animals make are so funny, I just had to put it in there! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/3/2008 8:13:00 AM
It's fun that Brian has us trying this new form! Good job here! Oh yes...this skinny little black dresses!!~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/3/2008 7:24:00 AM
Images flood into the mind as reality dawns.Great one Barbara.Rgds Brian & hanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/3/2008 5:29:00 AM
I can judge the form because I know nothing of it..lol. but I know a good poem and this is great. Weight watchers march..love it.
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Date: 12/3/2008 2:09:00 AM
Well done, and I'm sure I speak for all the ladies out there!!! Peace Fathima
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Date: 12/3/2008 1:29:00 AM
You sure got it right! Brilliantly done. Love, Nigel
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Date: 12/3/2008 12:05:00 AM
AWESOME! lainie
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