New Black Dress

Weekly weigh-in



Feet hit  the pavement





 Spaces-Imagism..per Brian Strand
Thought I'd try it, hope I got it right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Esquire Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 5:00 PM
Dear Barbara, Great Write I do believe YOU GOT it right GOOD LUCK YOUR SOUP Friend... HG Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments On My Write-- HG Friends ALWAYS...HG
Thomas Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 7:18 AM
Great spaces poem! I'm still stewing ideas around trying to write one of my own. The form is just fascinating. Thank you for your comments on my poem "Lament of the Philosopher's Hound"...yes, those wretched sighs animals make are so funny, I just had to put it in there! ~Juliane
Richards Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 8:13 AM
It's fun that Brian has us trying this new form! Good job here! Oh yes...this skinny little black dresses!!~ Love, Carrie
Strand Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 7:24 AM
Images flood into the mind as reality dawns.Great one Barbara.Rgds Brian & hanks for your welcome comments
Higgins Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 5:29 AM
I can judge the form because I know nothing of it..lol. but I know a good poem and this is great. Weight watchers march..love it.
Dawood Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 2:09 AM
Well done, and I'm sure I speak for all the ladies out there!!! Peace Fathima
Fawcett Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 1:29 AM
You sure got it right! Brilliantly done. Love, Nigel
George   Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 12:05 AM
AWESOME! lainie
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